Would you reject your child?
A poem36 total reviews
Comment from GWHARGIS
Another winner. I think Fanstory should give us a few more sixes. I'm always out by Friday. This was a reaffirming poem. God protects and forgives. Jesus paid the ultimate price for our forgiveness. Beautiful, as always. Gretchen
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Another winner. I think Fanstory should give us a few more sixes. I'm always out by Friday. This was a reaffirming poem. God protects and forgives. Jesus paid the ultimate price for our forgiveness. Beautiful, as always. Gretchen
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Thanks Gretchen for these terrific comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Write Right Writer
Roy...
This is a great poem with a great message. Thank you for sharing it with us. Your words of safety, acceptance, commitment, and protection are comforting and welcomed in today's world of danger, rejection, indifference, and vulnerability. Well said.
Technically, your poem is exceptional. Strong theme, focused content, steady flow, and a comfortable pace. Your rhythm, meter, and rhyme are flawless. Well done.
Blessings...
Curt (WRW)
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Roy...
This is a great poem with a great message. Thank you for sharing it with us. Your words of safety, acceptance, commitment, and protection are comforting and welcomed in today's world of danger, rejection, indifference, and vulnerability. Well said.
Technically, your poem is exceptional. Strong theme, focused content, steady flow, and a comfortable pace. Your rhythm, meter, and rhyme are flawless. Well done.
Blessings...
Curt (WRW)
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Thanks Curt, for these terrific comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Sugarray77
You always move me with your poetry, Roy. So well done and well-written too. I applaud you on your theme, presentation and that gripping art/photograph. Well done.
Melissa
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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You always move me with your poetry, Roy. So well done and well-written too. I applaud you on your theme, presentation and that gripping art/photograph. Well done.
Melissa
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Thanks Melissa, for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from newilk
What a beautiful poem <3 the rejection of children due do a parent's homophobia, transphobia or inability to help navigate drug addiction is always so tragic to me. how could you reject your own child?
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What a beautiful poem <3 the rejection of children due do a parent's homophobia, transphobia or inability to help navigate drug addiction is always so tragic to me. how could you reject your own child?
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Thanks for these terrific comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Kaiku
Your words are certainly powerful. The visual is one of the strongest I have seen, therefore I gave it 6 stars. The anguish, suffering and plea that is being made is gripping. Is this in Calcutta?
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Your words are certainly powerful. The visual is one of the strongest I have seen, therefore I gave it 6 stars. The anguish, suffering and plea that is being made is gripping. Is this in Calcutta?
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
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I?m not sure where it is my friend. Thanks for these terrific comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from dragonpoet
Morning Roy,
This is a good statement of faith. A good loving father would never neglect a child. God is this Father who son Jesus gives us forgiveness through his sacrifice.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Morning Roy,
This is a good statement of faith. A good loving father would never neglect a child. God is this Father who son Jesus gives us forgiveness through his sacrifice.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Thanks Joan for these terrific comments and a great review, blessings Roy
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No problem, Roy.
Joan
Comment from Michael Cassar
One's house should be a refuge strong,
where love and grace will linger long.
I find these two lines as very powerful in this poem. That's how I think of God and heaven. Although, Jesus is the essence of my faith, I believe God's refugee is open to all mankind. The poem is quite compelling. Always find you compose poetry like a Mozart, a genius with words and rhyming.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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One's house should be a refuge strong,
where love and grace will linger long.
I find these two lines as very powerful in this poem. That's how I think of God and heaven. Although, Jesus is the essence of my faith, I believe God's refugee is open to all mankind. The poem is quite compelling. Always find you compose poetry like a Mozart, a genius with words and rhyming.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Thanks Michael, for these terrific comments and a great review, blessings Roy
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Roy Always my pleasure
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Bless you
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
This is beautifully written. I love your last line: His faithfulness and love's my plea. In a world where people are shamed for speaking out for our faith, your light shines brightly.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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This is beautifully written. I love your last line: His faithfulness and love's my plea. In a world where people are shamed for speaking out for our faith, your light shines brightly.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2022
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Thanks Verna, for these terrific comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Fonda Little
Amazing piece you have here sir! The image you selected and the poem's background are great as well! God bless you sir and your work for His Glory In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2022
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Amazing piece you have here sir! The image you selected and the poem's background are great as well! God bless you sir and your work for His Glory In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!
Comment Written 13-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2022
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Thanks Fonda, for these beautiful comments and a sage review, blessings Roy
Comment from SuzieWoo
Really important subject matter and well expressed. This did make me think. I felt that the rhyming was perhaps a little 'shoe-horned' in from time to time, for example 'a refuge strong'. And for me this distracted me slightly from the message of the poem but overall I did enjoy it. Blessings.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2022
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Really important subject matter and well expressed. This did make me think. I felt that the rhyming was perhaps a little 'shoe-horned' in from time to time, for example 'a refuge strong'. And for me this distracted me slightly from the message of the poem but overall I did enjoy it. Blessings.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2022
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Thanks Susie, for these beautiful comments and a sage review, blessings Roy
