Pursue
Do your best5 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-The syllable count is good.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-You do a good job showing the importance
and characteristics of a review.
-A very good concluding line, as well.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-The syllable count is good.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-You do a good job showing the importance
and characteristics of a review.
-A very good concluding line, as well.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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Thank you and sorry for being soooo late !!
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You are welcome, and no need to be sorry😊
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent post my friend, the post has a perfect syllable count and the rhyming makes it very complete, with a review coming on cue as you probably knew, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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This is an excellent post my friend, the post has a perfect syllable count and the rhyming makes it very complete, with a review coming on cue as you probably knew, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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Thank you and sorry for being sooooo late !,
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Most welcome
Comment from NadineM
I like this 2-4-2 poem! The meaning is profound (if it implies you're planning to write again and be active on site!?) and the rhyming perfectly crafted!! Well done and best wishes in the contest! ~ Nadine
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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I like this 2-4-2 poem! The meaning is profound (if it implies you're planning to write again and be active on site!?) and the rhyming perfectly crafted!! Well done and best wishes in the contest! ~ Nadine
Comment Written 16-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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Thanks Nadine and sorry for being soooo !
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Pupa, it's so good to see you in print again--long time, no see.
I like your 2-4-2 poem. Good rhyming with Review/through/blue. A pleasure to read. I don't know if it's the poem that made me smile or seeing you name. Whatever the reason, we all need more reasons to smile. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. Welcome Back!
LateBloomer
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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Hi Pupa, it's so good to see you in print again--long time, no see.
I like your 2-4-2 poem. Good rhyming with Review/through/blue. A pleasure to read. I don't know if it's the poem that made me smile or seeing you name. Whatever the reason, we all need more reasons to smile. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. Welcome Back!
LateBloomer
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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Thanks and sorry for being sooo late !
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-4-2, Pursue, has the proper formatting and seems to suggest that the writers and readers will get better on both ends by looking for reasons to praise and reasons to offer help.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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This 2-4-2, Pursue, has the proper formatting and seems to suggest that the writers and readers will get better on both ends by looking for reasons to praise and reasons to offer help.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2023
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Thanks and sorry for being soooo late !
