Comment from patricia dillon

Excellent

I did think this was partly fantasy. All the same, it was very exciting. I was on the edge of my seat. I followed your adventures with some trepidation.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2022

Lol. Thank you for the fantastic review, Patricia. I always like to throw some action in my silly little stories. Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars and kind comments. I'm glad you liked the piece.

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Ron

reply by patricia dillon on 17-Oct-2022

You are welcome

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

Imagination rules with you without rules or rationality. Mountains in Tennessee with gators, and quicksand? I think not, but who am I to question you, especially if you two made the trip reality even in in your minds.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022

Hahaha. I read a few stories on here telling of just such adventures in the hills of TN. I just had to go find out myself. LOL. I love how the quicksand just runs down the side of the mountain into the alligator river. It's a site to behold. Haha. Thank you for the great review, friend.

Ron

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Wonderful that you and Sam escaped from all the dangers! Many don't, you know ...! I was going to enter a story about a trip with my dog, but he talks, and hence would prefer to tell the story himself - and I know people would then doubt that it's real ...! Lol. Best wishes for the contest. Hope you win a few dollars for your bravery. Buy a treat for Sam if you do. He's a real hero.
Wendy

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022

Thank you for the great review, Wendy. Yeah, I gave thought to having him talk to me through the whole thing too but said that's way to over the top for a "real" story. Lol. Yep, there's many dangers out there to watch for, that's for sure. Haha. I'm glad you liked this silly piece, Wendy. Thank you again.

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Ron

reply by Wendy G on 16-Oct-2022

I wrote a Sunny story using the prompt, but not to enter. Sunny is a talking dog who writes as well. It is ?unreal? for a dog to talk, although some pets do!

reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022

Nope. You should have entered it. One talking animal isn't any different than another. Lol

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

Are you sure this is a real trip? I can't imagine all those things happening as you relate them. It's a good thing you classified this as fiction. Lol. I did enjoy the story even if it was a bit much. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022

The trip was real. Lol. A lot of it was fabricated though. Haha. Just having some fun with the contest. It's just as real as other entries so I figured why not? Thank you for the great review and stars, PrettyBB. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.

Ron

Comment from jessizero

Exceptional

I laughed so hard at this. Your story was excellent and absolutely hilarious. Thank you so much for sharing this story here, and best wishes to you. I am sure you will do well in the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022

Hey, Jessi, hello. Thank you so much for the fantastic review and giant sixer. There may have been a little stretching of the truth in this but I did take my dog on a road trip to the grandparents once. Lol. I guess that's all that's required to qualify as a real story for the contest. I could have had my dog talking to me as well but that's a little too much fiction for a real contest in my book. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silly piece, J. Thank you again.

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Ron

reply by jessizero on 15-Oct-2022

You are quite welcome. Thank you for the laugh.