Gorgeous Greens
Nature Preens With...6 total reviews
Comment from JLR
Boogienights, Congratulations! A tremendous offering for the contest and quite deserving of the first place finish. Your work is a delight to read and your graphics made the poem complete is every possible way. A kudos to you!
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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Boogienights, Congratulations! A tremendous offering for the contest and quite deserving of the first place finish. Your work is a delight to read and your graphics made the poem complete is every possible way. A kudos to you!
Comment Written 31-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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Thank you for this exceptional review, you don't know how much I appreciate it. :)
Comment from Cecilia Lynne1
All the best to you in the contest. Green is one of my favourite colours. Your choice of the colour green was one of the first things that captured my attention. But you have also done an excellent job with your choice of art and presentation. Your introduction and description of green leads one to recognise the
the beauty of the colour, the many varying shades and the impact that the colour can have psychologically. You move on to describe other areas where the colour green is found and can make a difference to a human's life. Only sentence I may have worded sightly different would have been where you mention "eating green grapes 'most' all day." I may have chosen 'mostly' all day and night. I love your entry entitled "Gorgeous Green". Well done!
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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All the best to you in the contest. Green is one of my favourite colours. Your choice of the colour green was one of the first things that captured my attention. But you have also done an excellent job with your choice of art and presentation. Your introduction and description of green leads one to recognise the
the beauty of the colour, the many varying shades and the impact that the colour can have psychologically. You move on to describe other areas where the colour green is found and can make a difference to a human's life. Only sentence I may have worded sightly different would have been where you mention "eating green grapes 'most' all day." I may have chosen 'mostly' all day and night. I love your entry entitled "Gorgeous Green". Well done!
Comment Written 28-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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Thank you for this exceptional review and for the great suggestion...both mean a lot to me. :)
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Well deserved and you are welcomed.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Mystery poet a good day to you I hope this finds you well. Your favorite color entry was good, I enjoyed it. you executed it well with some good rhymes in there. great job and good luck!
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2022
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Hello Mystery poet a good day to you I hope this finds you well. Your favorite color entry was good, I enjoyed it. you executed it well with some good rhymes in there. great job and good luck!
Comment Written 19-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2022
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Thank you for this wonderful review, it's very appreciated. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is what I miss about England when I go away, it's the green, Ireland is known as the emerald isle, but England is so green and you never appreciate it until you spend time in a parched country scorched by the sun. I love eating green vegetables too. Your poem included all the things I love, a joy to read, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2022
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This is what I miss about England when I go away, it's the green, Ireland is known as the emerald isle, but England is so green and you never appreciate it until you spend time in a parched country scorched by the sun. I love eating green vegetables too. Your poem included all the things I love, a joy to read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2022
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Thank you for this thoughtful review, I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from Sally Law
This is fun and contains a lot of Green confessions and professions. Green in the house makes me happy too. It's like an extension of life when I bring flowers and greenery inside. It makes everything smell so fresh and green! Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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This is fun and contains a lot of Green confessions and professions. Green in the house makes me happy too. It's like an extension of life when I bring flowers and greenery inside. It makes everything smell so fresh and green! Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))
Comment Written 18-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Thank you, you don't know how much it means to me that you take the time to read my poems. I really appreciate it. :)
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Most welcome! My best as always, Sal :))
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Ah ha, an ode to green. I liked reading this even late at night. I thought these lines were amusing, appropriate, and true-to-life: Tasty green foods, avocados for dips,
makes my lips smile when paired up with chips.
Nice share.
The only suggestion, and it is only a suggestion, is that maybe you might want to write 'favorite' as 'fav'rite' only to make sure it fits the rhythm/meter when people are saying it aloud.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Ah ha, an ode to green. I liked reading this even late at night. I thought these lines were amusing, appropriate, and true-to-life: Tasty green foods, avocados for dips,
makes my lips smile when paired up with chips.
Nice share.
The only suggestion, and it is only a suggestion, is that maybe you might want to write 'favorite' as 'fav'rite' only to make sure it fits the rhythm/meter when people are saying it aloud.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2022
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Thank you for this great review and for your suggestion...both are very appreciated. :)
