Silly Seven
Girls just wanna have fun!16 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
As long as you had fun writing it is all that matters. Why anyone even thought of such a challenge is questionably deranged and yet there are a number of entries that gave it a try. Well done.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2022
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As long as you had fun writing it is all that matters. Why anyone even thought of such a challenge is questionably deranged and yet there are a number of entries that gave it a try. Well done.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2022
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Thanks! This was actually unexpectedly difficult.
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It had to be.
Comment from Charlotte Morse
Ha ha ha an excellent piece of work!
The prompt for this is really hard, a really difficult contest which you have excelled at! It must be especially tricky to keep it making sense, but you have achieved that too! I'm very impressed.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2022
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Ha ha ha an excellent piece of work!
The prompt for this is really hard, a really difficult contest which you have excelled at! It must be especially tricky to keep it making sense, but you have achieved that too! I'm very impressed.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2022
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I found this format to be quite difficult.
Comment from Bill Schott
This alliterative poem, Silly Seven, selects some startling sisters to spotlight. Should such a squad of siblings, being slobbering, sneaky, and sarcastic, surface. Scatter!
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2022
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This alliterative poem, Silly Seven, selects some startling sisters to spotlight. Should such a squad of siblings, being slobbering, sneaky, and sarcastic, surface. Scatter!
Comment Written 22-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2022
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Ah, I see what you did there Bill. Very nice!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry read well, Mystery Author. I liked how
you adhered to the same format in describing the seven. I
could picture each of them as I read. Your word choices
were well thought out. The letter 's' was used effectively and
correctly as required
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2022
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Your contest entry read well, Mystery Author. I liked how
you adhered to the same format in describing the seven. I
could picture each of them as I read. Your word choices
were well thought out. The letter 's' was used effectively and
correctly as required
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 20-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2022
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Probably would have been stronger with a binding first and last sentence. Still I?m here to learn, so not bad for a first attempt! I shall improve next time!
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Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good entry to the alliteration contest. The text is a nice size. You sell the poem by your descriptive sentence at the top near the title. Without it this would just be seven random sentences. I only wish there were more connection of ideas within the poem. However, I do realize this is a difficult prompt. The visual fits well with the last line. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2022
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This is a good entry to the alliteration contest. The text is a nice size. You sell the poem by your descriptive sentence at the top near the title. Without it this would just be seven random sentences. I only wish there were more connection of ideas within the poem. However, I do realize this is a difficult prompt. The visual fits well with the last line. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 20-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2022
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My first attempt at this difficult format. I shall improve next time!
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For a first attempt you did fine. At least you helped your poem by utilizing your descriptive sentence well. Good luck.
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem surely fits the contest description. I like all these things that puts bad smells and feelings into our world. Maybe some of those smelly sardines and slimy snails could be added to the snake soup and make it even more stinky.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2022
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This poem surely fits the contest description. I like all these things that puts bad smells and feelings into our world. Maybe some of those smelly sardines and slimy snails could be added to the snake soup and make it even more stinky.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
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Comment Written 20-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2022
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Thanks Joan. My first attempt at this format. It was harder than it looks! Appreciate your review!
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You're welcome. I don't doubt it.
Joan
