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God's Beauty

A poem.

4 total reviews 
Comment from lyenochka
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Great job with your mono-rhymed tercets, Raul! Yes, every morning brings us more reasons to praise God for all the beauty He created!! Congratulations on your second place finish!


 Comment Written 26-Oct-2022

reply by the author on 26-Oct-2022
    Thank you so much! I'm honored! It's appreciated!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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I enjoyed your contest entry, Raul. I liked the great rhyming,
the beautiful picture, and the true message. The use of the 2
colors of font worked well. I would not capitalize the word blue.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2022

reply by the author on 20-Oct-2022
    Thank you for your kind review. I erase the capitalization of the word blue. Thank you for your advice!
reply by Jannypan (Jan) on 20-Oct-2022
    😊🐈‍⬛
Comment from Bill Schott
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This six-line poem, Day Arises, has the required lines and both speak of the day time hours brought to the world by the beaming sun which rises, rides the sky, and sinks away.

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2022

reply by the author on 20-Oct-2022
    Thank you for your kind review!
Comment from Barbara Peabody Pouliot
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Very nice. Beautiful picture. I did not totally feel depth in the chosen words, but it is still very nice. I would change the contraction. Allow the 2 words to stand alone.
If you choose. Great job. Good luck
Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2022

reply by the author on 20-Oct-2022
    Thank you for your kind review!