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Promises Bequeathed

His Confessional Memoir

26 total reviews 
Comment from Regina Elliott
Exceptional
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Hello John, this is such a
tender and sensitive poem
to your beloved mother. So
very heartfelt and caring.
The words flowed so lovingly.
May you have a blessed
Sunday. All the best to you. ~

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2023


reply by the author on 15-Jan-2023
    Regina, thank you for going back and reading a post that is very dear to my heart. I appreciate the six stars, and I appreciate you. Thank you again.
Comment from Ulla
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Hi John, this beautiful poem and address to your mother moved me deeply. I am so sorry that you and your siblings fell out, and it put your mother in a difficult situation. I'm equally happy that you all reconciled well before your mother's death. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2022
    Thank you, Ulla, for the great review and kind words. I hope all is well! Thanks again!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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It's a parallel world to my own. Estranged from five sisters, with no offense being committed, simply ended up thinking who needs them but a sneer in the heart was like a jag. Happily, one step forward and pulled on a past fabric, slowly mending fences.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2022
    Thank you, Tom, for the great review, and I'm happy fences are being mended. Sometimes all it takes is remembering your shared childhood, which puts it all in perspective. Thanks again, Tom
Comment from Mrs. KT
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Good morning, John,
What an incredibly moving poetic offering that resonates deeply with me.
I was never estranged from my mother or father, but as they became weakened by their physical frailities and summarily passed away, the relationships I had with my two older sisters disintegrated. I have not spoken to either of them since 2007... So it goes...
Your words are tender and heartfelt to be treasured...

Thank you for sharing, John...
diane

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2022
    Thank you, Diane, for the wonderful review. I can't tell you I'm happy it resonated with you in such a fashion, but good or bad, it's expected given its content. Isn't it strange how commonplace these types of rivalries become and how quickly time runs out to reconcile? Three years had passed with my sisters and me and I know my mom suffered every moment. My blessing dear, friend. I'm honored you've read and will cherish the six stars.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
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powerful and moving prose poem regarding your Mom and reconciling things with her before her passing. I can relate to this poem about mothers and son's.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
    Thank you, jake, for the great review and comments.
Comment from Carolann Renaud
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Thank you for sharing this most precious and personal piece of that very special bond between a mom and her son. But mostly that very real and wonderful place you speak about. I too know that place. Your words bring them to life for those who are reading them. Keep writing with all your heart these very things that define you. Truth is Life.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
    Thank you, Carolann, for the great review and encouraging words and comments.
Comment from harmony13
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What a beautiful and heartfelt poem. The author's words are filled with
meaning, are descriptive and creative. Thank you for the author's notes -
I was glad to hear you all reconciled. The poem was written with intense
feelings and emotions. The artwork and writing styles used are awesome!
John, have a great weekend!....Maria

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
    Thank you, Maria, for the wonderful review and the six stars. It is all so much appreciated. You have a great weekend as well.
Comment from nomi338
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It is an odd coincidence that I would read this post immediately after having written in my very last review, the restorative powers of reconciliation in family disputes or misunderstandings. It is as if the power of that statement or belief needed validation. Your story is powerful because it is proof positive that we must always forgive each other and always work toward family togetherness, despite problems that sometimes occur.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
    I thank you so much, nomi, for the excellent review. Yes, I agree there is no finer feeling than reconciliation. It's always nice to hear from you, my friend.
reply by nomi338 on 28-Oct-2022
    Ditto.
Comment from Annmuma
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I thought of many things as I read your beautiful, insightful and touching post, but most of all, I thought of the comfort and pride in you it must have brought to your mom. I am touched by the things you reminded us all of -- in particular, that place of peace that belongs only to each of us, but is so difficult to find in today's world of seeming chaos.

This is a beautiful piece. Thanks for sharing. ann

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
    Thank you, Ann, for the great review and six stars. It's always nice to hear from you, as you are one of my favorites. Take good care, and thank you again.
Comment from irishauthorme
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John, I had to read this twice two days ago and then come back and read your words again today before I could formulate a review.
Not only is this a beautiful commemorative and a devotional to your Mom, but you relayed some great advice from your Mom, and also touched on a subject very few venture to discuss, that private garden inside us where we can go and experience many things; review our past, reminisce, see answers, hear voices from those of our loved ones who are no longer with us.
Your words affected me deeply, I am the last of my original family and I miss them. Growing up I made many mistakes that I wish I could go back and correct, but of course, that is impossible.
When everything gets to be too much, I go to the place you described and heal.
Your best work.
irish

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
    Thank you, Irish, for this beautiful review, and I'm happy you have found that place in the corner of your mind. I visit mine often and still. You are always much appreciated. Thank you for all the accolades, my friend.