Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 88 "Angel's Sprinkling Gold Dust"Musings of an old man - 2022
28 total reviews
Comment from jake cosmos aller
very nice and moving poem about the creation of the Moon and the power that the moon has on humans's reminding us of the power and glory of God's creation.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2022
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very nice and moving poem about the creation of the Moon and the power that the moon has on humans's reminding us of the power and glory of God's creation.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2022
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Thanks for the review Jake.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Yours is the second Fabulous Free Verser, and I have to say they are both amazing. I'm not normally a fan of unrhymed poetry, but this was wonderful. I'm sure more will agree with me. Well done!! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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Yours is the second Fabulous Free Verser, and I have to say they are both amazing. I'm not normally a fan of unrhymed poetry, but this was wonderful. I'm sure more will agree with me. Well done!! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 28-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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Thank you Sandra!
Comment from Bill Schott
This free verse, Angles Sprinkling Gold Dust, provides a different and positive creation story which leans into a cosmic theory curated by the power of God who sustains us.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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This free verse, Angles Sprinkling Gold Dust, provides a different and positive creation story which leans into a cosmic theory curated by the power of God who sustains us.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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Thanks Bill!
Comment from karenina
Is there a new way to approach the moon poetically? I would have said no...but look what you've rendered here!
Entirely original slant on one of the most frequent themes in verse!
Excellent "S" alliteration....
Sssssssssuper!
Karenina
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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Is there a new way to approach the moon poetically? I would have said no...but look what you've rendered here!
Entirely original slant on one of the most frequent themes in verse!
Excellent "S" alliteration....
Sssssssssuper!
Karenina
Comment Written 28-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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Sssssssssssmiles 😊🙏🎶🎶
Comment from Precious Owuamalam
Indeed, this made my morning. "God still calls on his Angels
sprinkling gold dust to brighten up things"
many thanks for sharing.
You may want to replace the "Angel's" in the penultimate line with "Angels"
Blessings and good health.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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Indeed, this made my morning. "God still calls on his Angels
sprinkling gold dust to brighten up things"
many thanks for sharing.
You may want to replace the "Angel's" in the penultimate line with "Angels"
Blessings and good health.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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Thank you and blessings for the highest and best are sent back in prayer for you! 🙏🙏🙏
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There was a partial eclipse a few days ago and I wonder whether that inspired you to write this magical, fantasy poem about the sun and moon, spreading a little sparkle over those orbs here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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There was a partial eclipse a few days ago and I wonder whether that inspired you to write this magical, fantasy poem about the sun and moon, spreading a little sparkle over those orbs here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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Hi Dolly, I am a moon and star gazer, living out in the country away from city lights our night sky explodes with shiny slivers of silver and of course the golden moon is beautiful.
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How delight it is to see the sky without the interference of the city lights, lucky you x x x
Comment from Ric Myworld
As I've often said, when it comes to poetry, I wouldn't know a sonnet from sorbet. But I always enjoy reading what others have to say, and hope that I can decipher their poems as they've intended them to be understood. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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As I've often said, when it comes to poetry, I wouldn't know a sonnet from sorbet. But I always enjoy reading what others have to say, and hope that I can decipher their poems as they've intended them to be understood. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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Thanks for stopping by!
Comment from Michael Cassar
A spiritual presentation of the topic DUST. The black background encapsulates the spirit of darkness. Yet, the color of grey unwashed stone does not survive. The Angels, God's ambassadors, spread around and turn dust into silver and sparkling gold. Words seem to have been chosen carefully to depict the drama of creation. Beautiful piece of free verse.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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A spiritual presentation of the topic DUST. The black background encapsulates the spirit of darkness. Yet, the color of grey unwashed stone does not survive. The Angels, God's ambassadors, spread around and turn dust into silver and sparkling gold. Words seem to have been chosen carefully to depict the drama of creation. Beautiful piece of free verse.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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Michael, I want to thank you very muchfor your articlate comments and validation of the free verse I submitted, 🙏🙏🙏
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Always my pleasure
Comment from Write Right Writer
JLR...
Excellent use of the "dust" theme. Strong theme. Focused content. Clear direction. Excellent pace and flow. Well done. Thanks for sharing your work with us.
Blessings...
Curt (WRW)
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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JLR...
Excellent use of the "dust" theme. Strong theme. Focused content. Clear direction. Excellent pace and flow. Well done. Thanks for sharing your work with us.
Blessings...
Curt (WRW)
Comment Written 27-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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WRW, Curt, thank you for your comments.
Comment from Wendy G
A great response to the club prompt. The grey dust becomes silver, precious, and then even more beautiful and precious, with the transforming gold. Very original and creative, and it lifts our view to a higher and more noble perspective.
Wendy
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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A great response to the club prompt. The grey dust becomes silver, precious, and then even more beautiful and precious, with the transforming gold. Very original and creative, and it lifts our view to a higher and more noble perspective.
Wendy
Comment Written 26-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2022
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Thank you for your review and comments, Wendy. I always value your preception of my writings.
