Fiona Falcon
Fiona flew to her fate9 total reviews
Comment from bob cullen
What an effing good poem. I love these types of contests as I prefer rediculous to sensitive every time. Contests such as these tend to bring a smile to the faces of readers. You did however miss one F word, it starts with F and finished with UCK. Of course, I'm referring to FIRETRUCK.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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What an effing good poem. I love these types of contests as I prefer rediculous to sensitive every time. Contests such as these tend to bring a smile to the faces of readers. You did however miss one F word, it starts with F and finished with UCK. Of course, I'm referring to FIRETRUCK.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Lol thank you so much
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
To write a poem, beginning each word with the same letter, is not always easy to write. It has to make sense. This story is about an intelligent bird who filled her belly with food before she flew away.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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To write a poem, beginning each word with the same letter, is not always easy to write. It has to make sense. This story is about an intelligent bird who filled her belly with food before she flew away.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Great take on the 'F-bomb! It read very fluidly and makes lots of sense. The only word I'm trying to understand is the 'fled' word. I couldn't relate it to the main synopsis...wouldn't it be an alternative to use 'flew'?
Genuinely interested to know the reason you chose this one.
Lied it overall!
Mario
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2022
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Great take on the 'F-bomb! It read very fluidly and makes lots of sense. The only word I'm trying to understand is the 'fled' word. I couldn't relate it to the main synopsis...wouldn't it be an alternative to use 'flew'?
Genuinely interested to know the reason you chose this one.
Lied it overall!
Mario
Comment Written 30-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2022
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Thank you
Comment from patricia dillon
This was very ingenious. It must have been very difficult to find exactly twenty words beginning with "F." You display your familiarity with falconry.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2022
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This was very ingenious. It must have been very difficult to find exactly twenty words beginning with "F." You display your familiarity with falconry.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much
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You're welcome
Comment from Celyn
Well done. I'm not sure I could have done this as it makes absolute sense and describes a falcon extremely well. I loved it as it depicts movement and is very visual.
Good luck with it.
Glenis
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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Well done. I'm not sure I could have done this as it makes absolute sense and describes a falcon extremely well. I loved it as it depicts movement and is very visual.
Good luck with it.
Glenis
Comment Written 28-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These birds of prey command the skies and seem totally fearless, I enjoyed your fine descriptions here, they have few predators, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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These birds of prey command the skies and seem totally fearless, I enjoyed your fine descriptions here, they have few predators, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much Dolly
Comment from the13thpoet
Happy Friday fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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Happy Friday fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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Thank you Happy Friday to you as well 🙂
Comment from Ricky1024
"Fiano Falcon's
This is a contest entry rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no grammar issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with this one.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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"Fiano Falcon's
This is a contest entry rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no grammar issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with this one.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 28-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Thomas Blanks
You are using Fiona twice. I am not sure if that is allowed. You definitely need one more if that is not allowed. Others have done it, some have not. Whatever you want to do.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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You are using Fiona twice. I am not sure if that is allowed. You definitely need one more if that is not allowed. Others have done it, some have not. Whatever you want to do.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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Thank you
