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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I loved the sentiments as you think about the struggle in the winter for wild life trying to find food, a fine use of all those (f) words here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2022
    Thank you, I'm always so glad to hear from you. :)
Comment from pome lover
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wow! where do you live? Is there that much snow already? We are still warm, with opened windows for divine fresh air.
HOWEVER :) that is a neat and heartfelt poem and message and wonderful pictures!! Good for you. The squirrel looks like she's got on a white fur coat. That one would be good to send off for a photo contest of some kind.
Katharine

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2022
    I live in Duluth, MN and we've only got a little snow so far( which promptly melted). But winters here can be harsh and putting out food helps out the wildlife a bit. Thanks so much for reading my poem. :)
reply by pome lover on 29-Oct-2022
    most welcome
Comment from Thomas Blanks
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Have you checked if you can reuse the same F-word more than once? Like you have used "for" twice and "friends" twice. I do not know, I am just asking.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
    I should check, but I think it's just limiting you to 20 F words. I'll definitely check though...thanks. :)
Comment from the13thpoet
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Happy Friday fellow poet, thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
    Thank you, that's very kind of you. :)