Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig

Excellent

This is a good 3-5-3 poem. The text can be clearly seen. The message is clearly presented. You may not understand the draw, but many do and spend big bucks enjoying it. The visual fits well. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2022

Thank you for the review. I dated a stripper for a sort period in Norfolk. It was messy and didn't end well. I also worked as a bouncer in one just outside of Camp Lejeune. Maybe that is why i don't care for them. Still, seems to br holding its own in the contest. Good times!

reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 30-Oct-2022

You are welcome. Not my cup of tea, but many are drinking it by the gallons.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

We have our fantasies and they should never come true as fantasies are not reality, so you should not feel frustrated or maybe you lost your enthusiasm? I enjoyed the humour here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2022

Thank you Dolly. I don?t frequent the establishments. Waste of money.

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

I have enjoyed your insightful and interesting poem. It is well written. The sentences flow with clarity. Well done. Excellent work! No mistakes found. Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2022

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022

Thank you kind Sir!