The Miranda Chronicles
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Fool on a Washer (Miranda)"Miranda solves a mystery.
15 total reviews
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Aaron is more concerned about booze than finding a skeleton. Shows where his priorities lie.
Finding th0se bodies increases the story's plot and leads to wondering who is down in the water, and just as importantly, why they are there, and why they were never reported missing?
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
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Aaron is more concerned about booze than finding a skeleton. Shows where his priorities lie.
Finding th0se bodies increases the story's plot and leads to wondering who is down in the water, and just as importantly, why they are there, and why they were never reported missing?
Comment Written 01-Jan-2023
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2023
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The story will get back to the cars under water. Thank you so much for this nice review. Gretchen
Comment from Jay Squires
Oh, wow! This is filled with tension, Gretchen. Fabulous job, stretching it out without having Waylon surfacing. And then to find two cars down there. I wonder ... if one of the cars has a federal agent in it, wouldn't you think they would have looked after their own? That's a helluva chapter, Gretchen!
Jay
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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Oh, wow! This is filled with tension, Gretchen. Fabulous job, stretching it out without having Waylon surfacing. And then to find two cars down there. I wonder ... if one of the cars has a federal agent in it, wouldn't you think they would have looked after their own? That's a helluva chapter, Gretchen!
Jay
Comment Written 31-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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If the Feds knew where to look. Who knows. I'm making this up as I go along. Lol. Thank you for this entertaining review. Gretchen
Comment from Wendy G
Oh I am guessing that Missy might know something about that other car! What will they do? Call the police? They seem very reluctant to do so, but this is a big find! Well written. Next, please!
Wendy
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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Oh I am guessing that Missy might know something about that other car! What will they do? Call the police? They seem very reluctant to do so, but this is a big find! Well written. Next, please!
Wendy
Comment Written 31-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much. I'm not sure if they are going to call the police or if they are caught up in the moment. Gretchen
Comment from lancellot
Well, it looks like the story is pursuing the missing person or possible death coverup angle. The scene is good. A bit of a stretch on the scuba but okay. Everything looks well written and paced to me.
Good job.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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Well, it looks like the story is pursuing the missing person or possible death coverup angle. The scene is good. A bit of a stretch on the scuba but okay. Everything looks well written and paced to me.
Good job.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review and incredible rating. Much appreciated. Gretchen
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I can't wait to see what else or who else is down there. You really have me into this story, and I smile when I see you've posted. Thank you for giving me something good to review.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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I can't wait to see what else or who else is down there. You really have me into this story, and I smile when I see you've posted. Thank you for giving me something good to review.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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While I appreciate the excellent rating, your comments made my day. Thank you so much! Gretchen
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, it isn't like we didn't know that Aaron is smitten, but as he gets his nerve up, it's likely there will be a few more of those kisses . . . or not, if Miranda says no. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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Well, it isn't like we didn't know that Aaron is smitten, but as he gets his nerve up, it's likely there will be a few more of those kisses . . . or not, if Miranda says no. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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Think she might nip this romance in the bud. Lol. Great review. Thank you. Gretchen
Comment from John Ciarmello
Your hanger parts are perfect, and you tell enough of the storyline to entice us inch by inch, making it exciting and intriguing where you are going next. Great stuff, Gretchen. Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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Your hanger parts are perfect, and you tell enough of the storyline to entice us inch by inch, making it exciting and intriguing where you are going next. Great stuff, Gretchen. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 31-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much. I really appreciate your encouraging review. Gretchen
Comment from Sankey
Wow! The plot is thickening! I thought you might have got stuck in the washer, from the title, hehe. Well done. Keep it coming. Is Waylon still suspended from school?
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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Wow! The plot is thickening! I thought you might have got stuck in the washer, from the title, hehe. Well done. Keep it coming. Is Waylon still suspended from school?
Comment Written 31-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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Thank you, Sankey. I appreciate your comments and enthusiastic review. Gretchen
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Isn't that sweet. He kisses her cheek. Funny how some guys get so romantic over silly little things. She evidently has a soft spot for Aaron or she wouldn't be doing this. They are probably working on a great mystery. LOL Good Job, Gretchen. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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Isn't that sweet. He kisses her cheek. Funny how some guys get so romantic over silly little things. She evidently has a soft spot for Aaron or she wouldn't be doing this. They are probably working on a great mystery. LOL Good Job, Gretchen. Nancy:)
Comment Written 30-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much for this great review. She just might have a soft spot for both of them. Thank you for your wonderful review and rating. Gretchen
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You chapter read well, Gretchen. It was filled with great details
and dialogue and intrigue. Your description of the pond and
Aaron and Waylon diving down into it was perfect. I could see
everything. I liked the part about Miranda being told she was the
brains, and I agree. The boys with their toys needed someone to
supervise. What an interesting find--the other car. I liked the way
they discussed who it might've belonged too. You are great at
setting up future interesting chapters in this story. Waylon is becoming
more and more comfortable with Miranda and so is Aaron.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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You chapter read well, Gretchen. It was filled with great details
and dialogue and intrigue. Your description of the pond and
Aaron and Waylon diving down into it was perfect. I could see
everything. I liked the part about Miranda being told she was the
brains, and I agree. The boys with their toys needed someone to
supervise. What an interesting find--the other car. I liked the way
they discussed who it might've belonged too. You are great at
setting up future interesting chapters in this story. Waylon is becoming
more and more comfortable with Miranda and so is Aaron.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 30-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2022
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Thank you so much for your detailed and encouraging review. I appreciate it. Gretchen
