Comment from royowen

Excellent

I don't think any of us is completely sane, and what is normal? Taking a group of figures and dividing by two? I don't think so. This reminded me of the film "One flew over the cuckoo's nest. Beautifully written. I love the characterisation, well done, good luck, Blessings

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022

I saw I arrived I ? haven?t a chance for I cannot get readers but I had fun conversing with myself thanks for the read and review Roy

reply by royowen on 01-Nov-2022

Well done

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

"A Fallow Mind"
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022

I appreciate your feedback, Thanks for your time and comment.

Comment from humpwhistle

Excellent

Conversing with one's own brain is a neat trick. Being insane and knowing it has to be a real downer. How does one expect to be released from his own head? From what I know about asylums, ain't nobody running them.

Best of luck at the polls.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 01-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022

Thanks. I hope this stands a chance but only two reads so far. I don't know if the photo of me near natural is scaring them away or not.