old/new love
my first acrostic31 total reviews
Comment from Regina Elliott
Very beauteous and romantic,
jessi. Congratulations on your
first time acrostic win. Have
a blessed Thanksgiving and
Godspeed. All the best to
you and your family.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
Very beauteous and romantic,
jessi. Congratulations on your
first time acrostic win. Have
a blessed Thanksgiving and
Godspeed. All the best to
you and your family.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
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Thanks so much!
Comment from susand3022
Hi Jessi,
I love this story! I truly hope everything stays in your 'happily ever after' mode!
I do have one suggestion, or offering? Normally, an Acrostic is named for the letters it's using. So the title of your poem ought to be Steve and Jessi
(a pretty appropriate name, all in all) ;)
For your first Acrostic, it's pretty awesome :)
I'll be keeping an eye out!
Susan :)
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
Hi Jessi,
I love this story! I truly hope everything stays in your 'happily ever after' mode!
I do have one suggestion, or offering? Normally, an Acrostic is named for the letters it's using. So the title of your poem ought to be Steve and Jessi
(a pretty appropriate name, all in all) ;)
For your first Acrostic, it's pretty awesome :)
I'll be keeping an eye out!
Susan :)
Comment Written 10-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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Thanks so much! I had no idea about the poem name.
Comment from Annmuma
Definitely a 6 star and I am so happy for you. There is nothing more important to a life well lived than to share it with someone who care and about whom you care. Beautifully done and good luck in the contest. ann
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
Definitely a 6 star and I am so happy for you. There is nothing more important to a life well lived than to share it with someone who care and about whom you care. Beautifully done and good luck in the contest. ann
Comment Written 10-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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Thanks so much. I appreciate your response and the six stars!
Comment from Aiona
What a cute poem! I like the structure - acrostic. Some acrostic poems seem very chunky, blocky, or stilted. This one flows very naturally. And the topic is relevant to the contest theme! Congratulations to you both! Maybe another happy poem is in the future!
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
What a cute poem! I like the structure - acrostic. Some acrostic poems seem very chunky, blocky, or stilted. This one flows very naturally. And the topic is relevant to the contest theme! Congratulations to you both! Maybe another happy poem is in the future!
Comment Written 10-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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Thanks so much for the kind words and six stars! I appreciate both.
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
Jessi I am so happy for you and Steve . I don't remember last times I felt such happiness and joy for a friend.. Now so you stay that way forever, I will think happy and loving thoughts for the two of you and hope I hear about a wedding coming up LOL, congrats on your rekindled romance and I believe you are my choice for this , contest too. Stay happy my lovely friend. Steve is a lucky guy
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
Jessi I am so happy for you and Steve . I don't remember last times I felt such happiness and joy for a friend.. Now so you stay that way forever, I will think happy and loving thoughts for the two of you and hope I hear about a wedding coming up LOL, congrats on your rekindled romance and I believe you are my choice for this , contest too. Stay happy my lovely friend. Steve is a lucky guy
Comment Written 09-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much! I appreciate your support and kind words. I am very happy.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
A powerful and joyful poem. All good things come to those who wait!
I am happy for you and wish you and Steve the best.
Good luck in the contest
Best regards
Mary
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
A powerful and joyful poem. All good things come to those who wait!
I am happy for you and wish you and Steve the best.
Good luck in the contest
Best regards
Mary
Comment Written 09-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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Thanks so much! Things are great so far
Comment from Mia Twysted
A very positive piece that inspires and createste the aura of romance. The air is sweeter when the reader has reached the end of the piece and left with a smile.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
A very positive piece that inspires and createste the aura of romance. The air is sweeter when the reader has reached the end of the piece and left with a smile.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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Thanks so much for the kind words. I?m glad it made you smile
Comment from jake cosmos aller
very powerful and moving poem about reconnecting with an old crush and realizing that he felt the same way as you did but was too shy to tell you. would life have been different if he had told you then???
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
very powerful and moving poem about reconnecting with an old crush and realizing that he felt the same way as you did but was too shy to tell you. would life have been different if he had told you then???
Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Thanks for reading and reviewing! I think things are perfect now. Things might have been different. I guess we?ll never know
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
I enjoyed your poem, and the thought that it is real brought even more pleasure. I'm happy for you. The progression of your thoughts here is good. It's not easy to write acrostically.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
I enjoyed your poem, and the thought that it is real brought even more pleasure. I'm happy for you. The progression of your thoughts here is good. It's not easy to write acrostically.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Thanks so much. I have never been able to write an acrostic before
Comment from Judy Lawless
This is a beautiful first attempt at a acrostic poem, Jessi. I love the theme, and the story it tells. You've found something new and exciting to write about. So happy for you. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
This is a beautiful first attempt at a acrostic poem, Jessi. I love the theme, and the story it tells. You've found something new and exciting to write about. So happy for you. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Thanks so much for the support
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You're most welcome, Jessi.