old/new love
my first acrostic31 total reviews
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This acrostic poem has a hopeful, optimistic tone. I appreciate your author notes very much. How amazing to get where you wanted to be. Nice job with the subject matter as well.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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This acrostic poem has a hopeful, optimistic tone. I appreciate your author notes very much. How amazing to get where you wanted to be. Nice job with the subject matter as well.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Thanks so much for the kind words
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Sandra does help many of us. She has a way of aiding things not "quite right" especially font size and such. Congrats on your rekindled love. I noticed you have been missing or I overlooked your submissions.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Sandra does help many of us. She has a way of aiding things not "quite right" especially font size and such. Congrats on your rekindled love. I noticed you have been missing or I overlooked your submissions.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine loved-up acrostic revealing your heart here and I loved the sentiment and the loving relationship you are developing, it is entering your writing with a soft glow, much enjoyed Jessi, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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A fine loved-up acrostic revealing your heart here and I loved the sentiment and the loving relationship you are developing, it is entering your writing with a soft glow, much enjoyed Jessi, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Dr. Von
This is the kind of acrostic that speaks to success. A wonderfully sweet creation with all the right words for those personal emotions. I like your approach to directing the flow and landing the message. Congratulations. Good work.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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This is the kind of acrostic that speaks to success. A wonderfully sweet creation with all the right words for those personal emotions. I like your approach to directing the flow and landing the message. Congratulations. Good work.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Thanks so much!
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Very welcome.
Comment from JoannaN
This is so sweet. It is a bit old-fashioned, as if taken from an old diary.
I would personally have it printed in some fancy font - this is something you can proudly hang on a wall :)
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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This is so sweet. It is a bit old-fashioned, as if taken from an old diary.
I would personally have it printed in some fancy font - this is something you can proudly hang on a wall :)
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Thanks so much. I will fool with the font and colors when I get home tonight
Comment from Richard Montfort Cary
Jessi,
I'm so glad for you. It only took twenty-five years! Not bad. And this poem, using the convention of his and your names down the left side, feels easy and natural, not forced. Congratulations! You've earned a six for this one! Hooray!
Richard
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Jessi,
I'm so glad for you. It only took twenty-five years! Not bad. And this poem, using the convention of his and your names down the left side, feels easy and natural, not forced. Congratulations! You've earned a six for this one! Hooray!
Richard
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much for the input and six stars! It means a lot coming from someone as talented as you.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
You've done a great job with your first acrostic poem - being in love has emboldened you to try new things:-)
Glad to see you writing again! Good luck with this contest.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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You've done a great job with your first acrostic poem - being in love has emboldened you to try new things:-)
Glad to see you writing again! Good luck with this contest.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much for the support and kind words!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing your first acrostic poem with us as a contest entry. For a first acrostic you did very well. Nothing seemed forces. I'm happy for you. I enjoyed reading and wish you luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Thank you for sharing your first acrostic poem with us as a contest entry. For a first acrostic you did very well. Nothing seemed forces. I'm happy for you. I enjoyed reading and wish you luck with the contest.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Thanks so much!
Comment from JLR
Jessi, I want so badly to give you a six for this In Celebration in your union of friendship that had a twenty five year gap! But alas, I have none to share. When a couple has the connection with a twin soul ... mountains and valleys, time and distance can never keep these types of souls apart! Good success in your abounding union.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Jessi, I want so badly to give you a six for this In Celebration in your union of friendship that had a twenty five year gap! But alas, I have none to share. When a couple has the connection with a twin soul ... mountains and valleys, time and distance can never keep these types of souls apart! Good success in your abounding union.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much for the kind words!
Comment from tempeste
Ciao !
Glad you and Steve have reconnected and have discovered to be in love.
25 years is a long time and much must have happened in between.
Maybe back then you were both just too afraid to speak up / to jeopardise your solid friendship.
We are all more grounded by 40/45 and more secure of our feelings.
Best of luck!
PS: I found it hard to read your names downwards
A couple of suggestions:
make Steve and Jessi the title and old/ new loves the subtitle.
Or put the first letters in your poem in another colour like red for passion/ love.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Ciao !
Glad you and Steve have reconnected and have discovered to be in love.
25 years is a long time and much must have happened in between.
Maybe back then you were both just too afraid to speak up / to jeopardise your solid friendship.
We are all more grounded by 40/45 and more secure of our feelings.
Best of luck!
PS: I found it hard to read your names downwards
A couple of suggestions:
make Steve and Jessi the title and old/ new loves the subtitle.
Or put the first letters in your poem in another colour like red for passion/ love.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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I will think about changing the formatting when I get home tonight. Thanks for the suggestions and the support!
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Ciao! I just voted for your entry .. you have 2 votes now!
