Class Is In Session
The scariest moment of my life.19 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Struck by a ghost who came out of nowhere. Many people do believe in ghosts. It is very possible that they do leave imprints when they gain their wings. I am going to read your other stories; they would be in your portfolio.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Struck by a ghost who came out of nowhere. Many people do believe in ghosts. It is very possible that they do leave imprints when they gain their wings. I am going to read your other stories; they would be in your portfolio.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Yes they are in my portfolio. All true experiences all though not as profound as this one. Thank you for your review!
Comment from Wendy G
Oh this gave me goose bumps; you wrote the story very well and your descriptions were excellent. I wish you success in the contest for your fine writing.
Wendy
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Oh this gave me goose bumps; you wrote the story very well and your descriptions were excellent. I wish you success in the contest for your fine writing.
Wendy
Comment Written 03-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Thank you for the kind words and awesome review! My competitor withdrew their entry so I am not sure where that leaves me? Limbo!
Comment from lyenochka
That's a cool ghost story! I guess that the ghost was inspecting her property? I wonder if something was unpeaceful in her spirit to come back and haunt like that. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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That's a cool ghost story! I guess that the ghost was inspecting her property? I wonder if something was unpeaceful in her spirit to come back and haunt like that. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 03-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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Thank you! There is only two entries???? Guess that means I?ll place!
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The ribbon will look good on your profile! 😊
Comment from Dr. Von
Your story is written with the crisp flow of description that I have come to appreciate in your creations. This work addresses the writing prompt very well. I like the story. It's this kind of edge-of-the-seat story that lives in the campfires of East Texas. Great work.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Your story is written with the crisp flow of description that I have come to appreciate in your creations. This work addresses the writing prompt very well. I like the story. It's this kind of edge-of-the-seat story that lives in the campfires of East Texas. Great work.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Great comments Sir! Are you from Texas? I appreciate your review!
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You are welcome. Yes, sir. Born and bred, but well-traveled.
Comment from Susan Newell
Douglas,
This is a truly fascinating story about the unexplained mysteries of life. One thing is for sure--consciousness lives outside the body. Perhaps that consciousness can gather enough energy to recreate spectral forms. Maybe wen we pass on, we'll learn what it's all about. Great story and well written.
Sue
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Douglas,
This is a truly fascinating story about the unexplained mysteries of life. One thing is for sure--consciousness lives outside the body. Perhaps that consciousness can gather enough energy to recreate spectral forms. Maybe wen we pass on, we'll learn what it's all about. Great story and well written.
Sue
Comment Written 03-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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It?s no maybe for me. This is a 100% true story. I wonder if the lightening storm gave her energy to come through?
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I wondered the same thing.
Comment from RodG
I can understand why you became a true believer that ghosts exist after this experience. You set the scene very well and it is easy to visualize the school marm ghost you describe. A well-told story in such few words. Rod
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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I can understand why you became a true believer that ghosts exist after this experience. You set the scene very well and it is easy to visualize the school marm ghost you describe. A well-told story in such few words. Rod
Comment Written 03-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Thanks Rod. This was a profound moment in my life!
Comment from royowen
I guess I remain a sceptic, not because I don't believe you, but it's not part of my experience, I testify of my meeting with God, but nobody believes that either, heh heh, so I do believe in a sense, but folk need to experience it for themselves I guess, but great story Douglas, blessings Roy
Typo (Lightening) started to flash. One lightens a load, but lightning flashes.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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I guess I remain a sceptic, not because I don't believe you, but it's not part of my experience, I testify of my meeting with God, but nobody believes that either, heh heh, so I do believe in a sense, but folk need to experience it for themselves I guess, but great story Douglas, blessings Roy
Typo (Lightening) started to flash. One lightens a load, but lightning flashes.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2022
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Arrgggh. Grammar and spelling is my nemesis, thank you so much for the correction and the review!
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That?s fine Douglas, a common mistake, it gets better.
Comment from Ricky1024
This contest entry rich in Theme and Imagery was well written.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing,
Doctor Ricky 1024
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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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This contest entry rich in Theme and Imagery was well written.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing,
Doctor Ricky 1024
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Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Thank you Sir! You da man!
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
Wow! I have always been a believer in the paranormal. Spirits are always walking among us. Some are more attuned to see them than others. Thanks for writing this story in large print. Your visual fits well. Thanks for sharing, and I wish you luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Wow! I have always been a believer in the paranormal. Spirits are always walking among us. Some are more attuned to see them than others. Thanks for writing this story in large print. Your visual fits well. Thanks for sharing, and I wish you luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 02-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2022
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Thank you! I was a believer after this incident.
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You are welcome.
