The Miranda Chronicles
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "Am I a Suspect? (Miranda)"Miranda solves a mystery.
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Comment from royowen
Miranda is questioned concerning the death of Ed Preston, and although she didn't exactly like Ed, she would wish him dead, nor anyone for that matter, the advantage of her is that she has a good and faithful nature, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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Miranda is questioned concerning the death of Ed Preston, and although she didn't exactly like Ed, she would wish him dead, nor anyone for that matter, the advantage of her is that she has a good and faithful nature, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 05-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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She isn't polished but she is honest. Thanks so much for this great review. Gretchen
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Yep,
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
. . . and the plot thickens, Gretchen. Waylon showed his caring
side helping Miranda. What a horrific sight Ed would've been. You
gave readers some great details about the personalities of all the
characters we've met so far. You left readers wondering what
happened to Ed and why. That's a whole nother chapter. Also,
did Aaron and Waylon find more this time ad they explored the
stinky pond?
You are doing a great job adding more and more to this story.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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. . . and the plot thickens, Gretchen. Waylon showed his caring
side helping Miranda. What a horrific sight Ed would've been. You
gave readers some great details about the personalities of all the
characters we've met so far. You left readers wondering what
happened to Ed and why. That's a whole nother chapter. Also,
did Aaron and Waylon find more this time ad they explored the
stinky pond?
You are doing a great job adding more and more to this story.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 04-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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The stinky pond will have to wait. Thank you for the nice comments and the excellent review. Gretchen
Comment from Ric Myworld
You paint pictures that kick my memories into overdrive. This is the second part that spoken about Miranda sitting on the washer, and of course we've all heard those tales. But you brought to mind Buckwheat in the old Little Rascal shows bobbing up and down, 'round and 'round in the washing machine with soap bubbles in his hair. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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You paint pictures that kick my memories into overdrive. This is the second part that spoken about Miranda sitting on the washer, and of course we've all heard those tales. But you brought to mind Buckwheat in the old Little Rascal shows bobbing up and down, 'round and 'round in the washing machine with soap bubbles in his hair. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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I had a beagle named Buckwheat. Lol. My sister's dog was spanky. I'm glad you are able to get good visuals with this story. I appreciate your fun review. Gretchen
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I had a dog named Spanky. Over the years your visuals have always been like lint picked from my brain. LOL.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Miranda is a suspect, but I doubt a very serious one. I'm sure there are a lot of people out to get him or maybe he actually died of natural causes, but I doubt it. Thank you for sharing. Still want to know about that body in the water.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Miranda is a suspect, but I doubt a very serious one. I'm sure there are a lot of people out to get him or maybe he actually died of natural causes, but I doubt it. Thank you for sharing. Still want to know about that body in the water.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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I promise the next couple of chapters will deal with the body in the water. Lol. Thanks so much for this wonderful review. Gretchen
Comment from John Ciarmello
A perfect lead into the next chapter, Gretchen. I'm truly enjoying this saga. You have a special style. I know I've said it before, but your organization of scenes and your natural ability for dialogue are intriguing and keep your reader engaged and confident what is coming up next will be as good, if not better. Great work!
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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A perfect lead into the next chapter, Gretchen. I'm truly enjoying this saga. You have a special style. I know I've said it before, but your organization of scenes and your natural ability for dialogue are intriguing and keep your reader engaged and confident what is coming up next will be as good, if not better. Great work!
Comment Written 04-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Well, thank you. I feel like I should courtesy. Lol. I do appreciate your kind words. I'm glad people seem to be enjoying this as much as I'm enjoying writing it. Gretchen
Comment from Wendy G
Oh my goodness. She's in an awkward position. Wrong place, wrong time. So well written, and I apologise for being out of sixes. It's realistic dialogue, and very vivid descriptions. Well done.
Wendy
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Oh my goodness. She's in an awkward position. Wrong place, wrong time. So well written, and I apologise for being out of sixes. It's realistic dialogue, and very vivid descriptions. Well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 04-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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I'll take a virtual six. Thank you so much for this nice review. Gretchen
Comment from Sankey
Hey, I am so glad your story, as gruesome as this bit is, is continuing. You certainly have a talent for fiction writing. I have been told I should do some fiction as well. No spags. Well done.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Hey, I am so glad your story, as gruesome as this bit is, is continuing. You certainly have a talent for fiction writing. I have been told I should do some fiction as well. No spags. Well done.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much for this nice review. As for writing fiction. Do it. Throw caution to the wind and just go for it. Greychen
Comment from nancy_e_davis
This is great Gretchen. You really have a great story going here. Your characters are so real. Conversations so believable. I am hooked! LOL Well done my friend. Well done. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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This is great Gretchen. You really have a great story going here. Your characters are so real. Conversations so believable. I am hooked! LOL Well done my friend. Well done. Nancy:)
Comment Written 04-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Thanks so much, Nancy. I appreciate your nice review and the stars. Gretchen
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This was a good chapter, especially you navigated skillfully the trap of having to repeat information the reader already knows when a new character comes in.
I'm not the best judge, but my gut feeling says that this chapter should have had a warning on it for language. Better safe than sorry. Kate xx
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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This was a good chapter, especially you navigated skillfully the trap of having to repeat information the reader already knows when a new character comes in.
I'm not the best judge, but my gut feeling says that this chapter should have had a warning on it for language. Better safe than sorry. Kate xx
Comment Written 03-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much for the kind review and the helpful information about the rating. Gretchen
Comment from Jay Squires
I guess it comes at no surprise to anyone that she would become a suspect. At least a person of interest. If I were the murderer and I know what Miranda had said in the store, I'd have taken the time after killing Preston, to cut off his "tallywhacker". Ain't a jury in the world wouldn't convict Miranda if that happened. LOL, a great scene!
Jay
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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I guess it comes at no surprise to anyone that she would become a suspect. At least a person of interest. If I were the murderer and I know what Miranda had said in the store, I'd have taken the time after killing Preston, to cut off his "tallywhacker". Ain't a jury in the world wouldn't convict Miranda if that happened. LOL, a great scene!
Jay
Comment Written 03-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2022
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Thanks so much, Jay. I appreciate your comments and the nice review. Gretchen
