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Comment from Pam Lonsdale
As soon as I saw the title I knew your poem must be about the mountains - and you paint a lovely picture of the early-morning look and feel of those "round mounds." Not sure I understand the wet t-shirt reference, but it did make me smile:-)
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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As soon as I saw the title I knew your poem must be about the mountains - and you paint a lovely picture of the early-morning look and feel of those "round mounds." Not sure I understand the wet t-shirt reference, but it did make me smile:-)
Comment Written 05-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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Round Mounds is about nature and the personification of a woman with curb. You are very kind, Pam. I always appreciate constructive feedback and reviews. It's good to hear from you. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy Word Weaver
"Hand over the chocolate and nobody gets hurt." - anonymous
Comment from Brady Bowen
I really enjoyed the evocative language, made more impactful by its brevity. The wet-tshirt reference is fun and original. Keep writing! Good work...
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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I really enjoyed the evocative language, made more impactful by its brevity. The wet-tshirt reference is fun and original. Keep writing! Good work...
Comment Written 05-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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You are very kind, Brady. I always appreciate positive reviews. It's good to hear from you. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy Word Weaver
"Hand over the chocolate and nobody gets hurt." - anonymous
Comment from Ricky1024
This Tanka was with interesting art work, multi color.
Speaking about the roundness of the mountain.
Well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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This Tanka was with interesting art work, multi color.
Speaking about the roundness of the mountain.
Well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 04-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem :) Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy Word Weaver
"Hand over the chocolate and nobody gets hurt." - anonymous
Comment from harmony13
I enjoyed the read of this poem. Some of my favorite colors used! The words flow and connect well. The color scheme used with the words of
this poem are awesome! The artwork is lovely and goes well with these
words. Hi Gypsy, hope you are doing well.....Maria
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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I enjoyed the read of this poem. Some of my favorite colors used! The words flow and connect well. The color scheme used with the words of
this poem are awesome! The artwork is lovely and goes well with these
words. Hi Gypsy, hope you are doing well.....Maria
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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Hello, Maria, I am good. How are you doing? It's good to hear from you again. Thank you very much, as always, I am incredibly thankful for your kind review.
Gypsy hugs
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Hi Gypsy,
I am well, thank you. I was in New Orleans for a few weeks and that was fun! Stay well and safe!.....Maria
Comment from Mary Vigasin
A beautiful presentation with words so poetic to describe the beauty of the scene. You lull the reader into serenity with images and words, and then the wet t-shirt line. Funny. Thanks for the laugh.
Best wishes and regards,
Mary
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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A beautiful presentation with words so poetic to describe the beauty of the scene. You lull the reader into serenity with images and words, and then the wet t-shirt line. Funny. Thanks for the laugh.
Best wishes and regards,
Mary
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Mary, it's good to hear from you and you sound in very good spirits. I'm well. I appreciate your excellent and kind review. Have a nice day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, your poem has lots of good imagery. I'm sure that the men would love to see a real life wet t-shirt contest, but perhaps not by FS members. We're an older group with a droop - lol. They will have to use their imagination--no disappointment there. A fun poem. Well done. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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Hi Gypsy, your poem has lots of good imagery. I'm sure that the men would love to see a real life wet t-shirt contest, but perhaps not by FS members. We're an older group with a droop - lol. They will have to use their imagination--no disappointment there. A fun poem. Well done. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 06-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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LoL I know what you mean, everything goes south. hehehe We are beautiful in our own way. Thank you, Margaret, it's always a pleasure to hear from you.
Gypsy hugs
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I can't wait to see your photo one day. Like I said, after cancer, I thought ... what do I have to be afraid of (hacking). I've survived cancer. Be brave. Xo. Margaret
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your Tanka poem - Excellent picture presentation - good theme - very clever lol - poem flows well - provides a subtle and suggestive picture - becoming clear after satori - then a reread - all fits together perfectly then - followed by a smile Nice job
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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I like your Tanka poem - Excellent picture presentation - good theme - very clever lol - poem flows well - provides a subtle and suggestive picture - becoming clear after satori - then a reread - all fits together perfectly then - followed by a smile Nice job
Comment Written 06-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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LoL Thank you, AP. I appreciate your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Eternal Muse
A great tanka, Gypsy. Loved your imagery, visuals and artistic presentation. Excellent choice of an artwork. Admired the originality too.
As usual, it's a pleasure to read your work.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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A great tanka, Gypsy. Loved your imagery, visuals and artistic presentation. Excellent choice of an artwork. Admired the originality too.
As usual, it's a pleasure to read your work.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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Thank you. I appreciate your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Oh my! I never expected gently rolling mountains being compared to a wet T-shirt contest, but I can see it. I really can. Thank you once again, for sharing an entire package.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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Oh my! I never expected gently rolling mountains being compared to a wet T-shirt contest, but I can see it. I really can. Thank you once again, for sharing an entire package.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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LoL women wouldn't but men have a one track mind. I like round curby mountains as in a beautiful imagery. When I write haiku or tanka I try to put myself in the shoes of other people or animals or insicts ... any sentient being. It's a good exercise.
Thank you again, Barbara, you are very kind.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy----and I like that, "nature's wet tee shirt contest," I'm PAIRaphasing----eh, ha, ha! Get it? Did you see what I did there, woo!
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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Another fine poem, Gypsy----and I like that, "nature's wet tee shirt contest," I'm PAIRaphasing----eh, ha, ha! Get it? Did you see what I did there, woo!
Comment Written 06-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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LoL Thank you. I appreciate your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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Thank you very much, Mike. Have a great evening.
Gypsy hugs
