Suffering is...
Life is full of suffering.29 total reviews
Comment from Fleedleflump
This is a fascinating approach to the prompt - to populate its spine with triggers and symptoms, while topping and tailing it with interpretation. In many ways, we have it better than ever, and yet atrocities cannot seemingly be avoided.
Mike
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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This is a fascinating approach to the prompt - to populate its spine with triggers and symptoms, while topping and tailing it with interpretation. In many ways, we have it better than ever, and yet atrocities cannot seemingly be avoided.
Mike
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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Your descriptive is very creative and true. Thank you.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Interesting. more than the write, excuse me, is the photo. Imagine the throng therein as only the slightest splinter of all the humans that live on this planet. That's a lot of competition and makes for envy, jealousy and combat eventually. Still, you're right.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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Interesting. more than the write, excuse me, is the photo. Imagine the throng therein as only the slightest splinter of all the humans that live on this planet. That's a lot of competition and makes for envy, jealousy and combat eventually. Still, you're right.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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Yes, there is no finite list that corrals suffering. Thank you for reading.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A powerful write about the nature of man and the need for war. There is only one man responsible for this war and his mental illness has caused many to suffer under his hand. I pray that the madness stops, but I fear whilst this man is in charge, nothing will change, a poignant write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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A powerful write about the nature of man and the need for war. There is only one man responsible for this war and his mental illness has caused many to suffer under his hand. I pray that the madness stops, but I fear whilst this man is in charge, nothing will change, a poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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Thank you.
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. The sentences flow with clarity. It's beautifully written. Excellent work! No mistakes found in your poetry. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. The sentences flow with clarity. It's beautifully written. Excellent work! No mistakes found in your poetry. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 06-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Teri7
This is very good what you have written for the writing prompt on Human suffering. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery from the art work you chose. It is so sad that so many have had to suffer really horrible lives. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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This is very good what you have written for the writing prompt on Human suffering. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery from the art work you chose. It is so sad that so many have had to suffer really horrible lives. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 06-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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Thank you.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are heartfelt, sad, true, descriptive and creative. I
found these words to strong yet it is the way thing are especially in
Ukraine. Thank you for the author's notes - I believe there is always hope.
The poem flows and connects well. The artwork goes well with this poem.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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The author's words are heartfelt, sad, true, descriptive and creative. I
found these words to strong yet it is the way thing are especially in
Ukraine. Thank you for the author's notes - I believe there is always hope.
The poem flows and connects well. The artwork goes well with this poem.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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Thank you. The world just needs to be in 'Harmony'
Comment from prettybluebirds
Mankind seems to live in a plague-filled world. War after war consumes lives and destroys the environment. Disease kills millions every year. I hope things change someday. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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Mankind seems to live in a plague-filled world. War after war consumes lives and destroys the environment. Disease kills millions every year. I hope things change someday. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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For sure. Thanks for the read.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
Shucks, the formatting of this poem alone into the shape of a cross is super creative. Kudos! This is a good entry into the free-style human suffering contest. The text is a nice size. Listing the various situations in which humans have suffered is a great touch. The visual fits well. Good luck in the contest. This is just well-done and so creative!
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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Shucks, the formatting of this poem alone into the shape of a cross is super creative. Kudos! This is a good entry into the free-style human suffering contest. The text is a nice size. Listing the various situations in which humans have suffered is a great touch. The visual fits well. Good luck in the contest. This is just well-done and so creative!
Comment Written 06-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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Thank you so much. No person needs to suffer.
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Amen, you are preaching to the choir. You are welcome.
Comment from jessizero
I really liked the way you formatted this free-style poem. You said so much in so few words and arranged them in a powerful way. Thanks for sharing and best wishes to you.
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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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I really liked the way you formatted this free-style poem. You said so much in so few words and arranged them in a powerful way. Thanks for sharing and best wishes to you.
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Comment Written 06-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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Awesome comments. Thank you.
