Vibrations
A Diatelle Poem28 total reviews
Comment from Boogienights
I love music and everytime I listened to my dads jazz, it really vibrated in my soul. I understand what you are talking about in your well written poem.
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I love music and everytime I listened to my dads jazz, it really vibrated in my soul. I understand what you are talking about in your well written poem.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Thank you -- Jazz is just so good to listen to!
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem follows the form well using the orchestra and music as metaphors for life and love.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
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This poem follows the form well using the orchestra and music as metaphors for life and love.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 08-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Smiles to you Joan! Thanks for the good wishes.
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Same to you and you're welcome.
Joan
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You brought the strings, the woods and the brass to this orchestral extravaganza here and I enjoyed the music within, a fine diatelle for the contest, love Dolly x
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You brought the strings, the woods and the brass to this orchestral extravaganza here and I enjoyed the music within, a fine diatelle for the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Nov-2022
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Thank you.
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No mistakes found in your poetry. Thank you for sharing!
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It's beautifully written. The sentences flow with clarity. Excellent work! No mistakes found in your poetry. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
Kudos for you for creating a diatelle for this poetry contest. The requirements alone made my head spin. You seem to have handled them like a boss. Your poem is also good. You used a lot of sensory hearing and touch words. All are the types of word expected in listening to an orchestra. You also have a great visual. This is a well-done poem. Good luck in the contest. I will remember this entry.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Kudos for you for creating a diatelle for this poetry contest. The requirements alone made my head spin. You seem to have handled them like a boss. Your poem is also good. You used a lot of sensory hearing and touch words. All are the types of word expected in listening to an orchestra. You also have a great visual. This is a well-done poem. Good luck in the contest. I will remember this entry.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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my sincere thank you Ms Sandra
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You are welcome.
Comment from Eternal Muse
A very well written Diatelle. I like its diamond shape. The rhyming sounds musical and is a treat for the ear. Excellent imagery, visuals and presentation. Good luck in the contest.
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A very well written Diatelle. I like its diamond shape. The rhyming sounds musical and is a treat for the ear. Excellent imagery, visuals and presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
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Thank you
Comment from susand3022
Hello Author,
I really like your topic and the way you made your poem sing like an orchestra! It was very creative. I will make one tiny suggestion though. You may not want to rhyme IN with IN as it isn't a rhyming word, it's a repeat word. ;)
Good luck with the contest!
Susan :)
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Hello Author,
I really like your topic and the way you made your poem sing like an orchestra! It was very creative. I will make one tiny suggestion though. You may not want to rhyme IN with IN as it isn't a rhyming word, it's a repeat word. ;)
Good luck with the contest!
Susan :)
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
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Thanks much
Comment from nomi338
A poem about music that is musical enough to become music to my eyes and ears. Your style and skill are impressive. I have never tried this type of poem before. I find it entertaining and intriguing.
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A poem about music that is musical enough to become music to my eyes and ears. Your style and skill are impressive. I have never tried this type of poem before. I find it entertaining and intriguing.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
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Thanks freind!
Comment from jake cosmos aller
you nailed the form. Makes me jealous. I was going to try it but perhaps you scared me off. I like the interplay of the various instruments in the band. what sort of music were they playing?
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you nailed the form. Makes me jealous. I was going to try it but perhaps you scared me off. I like the interplay of the various instruments in the band. what sort of music were they playing?
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
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Vivaldi would be my first pick. LOL
Comment from Kaiku
I am not familiar with this style but it seems you performed well, without a conductor, mind you! Your words would certainly indicate you have a knowledge of musical instruments. Good luck!
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I am not familiar with this style but it seems you performed well, without a conductor, mind you! Your words would certainly indicate you have a knowledge of musical instruments. Good luck!
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
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Thank you
