Vibrations
A Diatelle Poem28 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting and well written Diatelle poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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This is a very interesting and well written Diatelle poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used used very good descriptive words and very nice imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Give it a go Teri ? I am certain you would do quite well.
Comment from LJbutterfly
You did a remarkable job on this Diatelle poem with its complicated syllable count. You made the message make sense. As a former musician, I enjoyed envisioning the sounds made by each instrument mentioned. Your poem Zings. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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You did a remarkable job on this Diatelle poem with its complicated syllable count. You made the message make sense. As a former musician, I enjoyed envisioning the sounds made by each instrument mentioned. Your poem Zings. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Smiling back!
Comment from GWHARGIS
I loved how you lead us into the music. Each instrument another piece to the puzzle. The evocative descriptions of each sound. Each unique but melding together. Quite lovely. Thank you for posting. Gretchen
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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I loved how you lead us into the music. Each instrument another piece to the puzzle. The evocative descriptions of each sound. Each unique but melding together. Quite lovely. Thank you for posting. Gretchen
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Wow! This is super! I love the music and how you display the words centered so all can read how you have mastered the diatelle poem! You have described the richness of the different instruments so well! I am a music lover and love to hear the sympathy in all its wonder! Thank you for sharing this lovely piece with the rest of us here on FS!
Jesse
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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Wow! This is super! I love the music and how you display the words centered so all can read how you have mastered the diatelle poem! You have described the richness of the different instruments so well! I am a music lover and love to hear the sympathy in all its wonder! Thank you for sharing this lovely piece with the rest of us here on FS!
Jesse
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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Thanks buddy!
Comment from Benjohnsonjr
This poem is sheer brilliance and something a lifelong musician like me could really appreciate. Your use of imagery and words to evoke the auditory senses is masterful. You've stuck to the brief perfectly and honestly produced something both literally and visually spectacular. All the best with the contest. Hope you win.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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This poem is sheer brilliance and something a lifelong musician like me could really appreciate. Your use of imagery and words to evoke the auditory senses is masterful. You've stuck to the brief perfectly and honestly produced something both literally and visually spectacular. All the best with the contest. Hope you win.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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Ben, I delight in your enjoyment of this poem.
Comment from harmony13
I really enjoyed your poem! The author's words are engaging, descriptive
and creative. The author describes these instruments well. I wanted to
be there as the author describes these vibrations! My son is a musician, many times in orchestras so I pictured these instruments! The artwork is awesome and compliments this poem well. Have a great week!...Maria
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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I really enjoyed your poem! The author's words are engaging, descriptive
and creative. The author describes these instruments well. I wanted to
be there as the author describes these vibrations! My son is a musician, many times in orchestras so I pictured these instruments! The artwork is awesome and compliments this poem well. Have a great week!...Maria
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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Maria, I hope your son's music fills his and your Soul with awesome JOYS!
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I would have given this a six if I had one left. I am not too familiar with diatelles at all, but it looks like you did an excellent job with the form. Very nice sense of sound here. I love poems about music.
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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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I would have given this a six if I had one left. I am not too familiar with diatelles at all, but it looks like you did an excellent job with the form. Very nice sense of sound here. I love poems about music.
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Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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Crystie I love your kind words, thanks!
Comment from Fleedleflump
I love the way the form builds and then dissipates, like a thought incepted, analysed, and then allowed to drift. This works well with your musical theme, as a tune builds and then concludes in a natural rhythm. I very much enjoyed.
Mike
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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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I love the way the form builds and then dissipates, like a thought incepted, analysed, and then allowed to drift. This works well with your musical theme, as a tune builds and then concludes in a natural rhythm. I very much enjoyed.
Mike
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Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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Mike, thanks for the good comment!
