Teabag
Pleiades Poetry16 total reviews
Comment from jaded831
Creative, unique, tastefully written. Such a simple subject, yet you made it into a work of art. I applaud you. I still have more reading to do, but your poem is truly a winner, even if you don't win the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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Creative, unique, tastefully written. Such a simple subject, yet you made it into a work of art. I applaud you. I still have more reading to do, but your poem is truly a winner, even if you don't win the contest.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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Thanks for this validation
Comment from Wendy G
Yes, I am with you on this one, and that's my experience with a cup of tea, very refreshing and relaxing.
Original and well presented, so I send goodwishes for your entry in the contest!
Wendy
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Yes, I am with you on this one, and that's my experience with a cup of tea, very refreshing and relaxing.
Original and well presented, so I send goodwishes for your entry in the contest!
Wendy
Comment Written 08-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Thanks Wendy!
Comment from Kaiku
Excellent. Makes me want to bring a pot to an almost boil and drop in a fragrance of my favorite tea bag. Great use of adjectives. You were tremendous!
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Excellent. Makes me want to bring a pot to an almost boil and drop in a fragrance of my favorite tea bag. Great use of adjectives. You were tremendous!
Comment Written 08-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Kahiki, thanks!
Comment from lyenochka
What a timely poem as I just made myself a cup of tea on this snowy, cold afternoon! Great form in your Pleiades poem. I liked your description of the "tassel" and "Tiny wisps of fragrant smells."
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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What a timely poem as I just made myself a cup of tea on this snowy, cold afternoon! Great form in your Pleiades poem. I liked your description of the "tassel" and "Tiny wisps of fragrant smells."
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 08-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Shirley McLain
I love drinking tea, and your poem made me make a cup before I did any writing. You did an excellent job, and I have no complaints, just praises. Good luck in the contest. Shirley
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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I love drinking tea, and your poem made me make a cup before I did any writing. You did an excellent job, and I have no complaints, just praises. Good luck in the contest. Shirley
Comment Written 08-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Shirley, thank you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Tea is a great calming tool and my two children love their tea and miss sharing a pot of tea with their Father. I gave up tea a long time ago and only drink water now, but I remember drinking it with family and friends and tea seems to bring us all together. Love your fine use of words here in this unusual form, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Tea is a great calming tool and my two children love their tea and miss sharing a pot of tea with their Father. I gave up tea a long time ago and only drink water now, but I remember drinking it with family and friends and tea seems to bring us all together. Love your fine use of words here in this unusual form, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Thank you, wow, you just be quite displayed to give up tea.
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I used to drink black tea and it was staining my teeth!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written Pleiades poem you have penned about a teabag. You used very good descriptive words with very nice imagery from the art work you chose. I love drinking types of tea that are relaxing before bedtime. Thank you for sharing. Teri
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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This is a very well written Pleiades poem you have penned about a teabag. You used very good descriptive words with very nice imagery from the art work you chose. I love drinking types of tea that are relaxing before bedtime. Thank you for sharing. Teri
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Thomas Blanks
This pleasing Pleiades poem perfectly presents prompted piece. I could smell the tea brewing in the cup, although I prefer English Breakfast, oolong will do, or Darjeeling. That always sounded more dangerous. I bet James Bong drank Darjeeling tea!
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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This pleasing Pleiades poem perfectly presents prompted piece. I could smell the tea brewing in the cup, although I prefer English Breakfast, oolong will do, or Darjeeling. That always sounded more dangerous. I bet James Bong drank Darjeeling tea!
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Thomas great alliterations ? sip away, mate!
Comment from Eternal Muse
This made me by yearn for a cup of oolong tea (lol). Fantastic visuals.
Great use of descriptive adjectives.
Excellent imagery, visuals and artistic presentation. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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This made me by yearn for a cup of oolong tea (lol). Fantastic visuals.
Great use of descriptive adjectives.
Excellent imagery, visuals and artistic presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good Pleiades poem for this contest. The text is a great size. The message about the pleasure from a moment with a good cup of tea is clearly stated. The use of tranquil in the last line is effective in conveying the speaker's mood. The visual fits perfectly. The poem and presentation are done well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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This is a good Pleiades poem for this contest. The text is a great size. The message about the pleasure from a moment with a good cup of tea is clearly stated. The use of tranquil in the last line is effective in conveying the speaker's mood. The visual fits perfectly. The poem and presentation are done well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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My sincere thanks!
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You are welcome.
