Teabag
Pleiades Poetry16 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation.
-You do a good job describing the
sensations associated with drinking tea.
-Effective imagery with words or phrases like
"Tassel draped" and "Tiny wisps."
-The mood is pleasant and the day is tranquil.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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-Very nice image and presentation.
-You do a good job describing the
sensations associated with drinking tea.
-Effective imagery with words or phrases like
"Tassel draped" and "Tiny wisps."
-The mood is pleasant and the day is tranquil.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Pam, thanks!
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You are welcome!
Comment from Bill Schott
This Pleiades poem, Teabag, has the proper formatting and certainly purports the many splendors and desired effects of those tiny tea leaves when brewed. Nice.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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This Pleiades poem, Teabag, has the proper formatting and certainly purports the many splendors and desired effects of those tiny tea leaves when brewed. Nice.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Thanks
Comment from jessizero
I am impressed that you found that many t-words describing tea bags. The descriptions were very nice. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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I am impressed that you found that many t-words describing tea bags. The descriptions were very nice. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Jessi, thanks
Comment from Celyn
This makes me want a cup of tea! It fulfills the requirements of a Pleiades poem so well done. The rhythm is a bit odd in places but the choice of T words is very good except that I don't get how the soul can be transported to new heights and then be neither high nor low. Perhaps I am missing something.
Good luck with it
Celyn
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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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This makes me want a cup of tea! It fulfills the requirements of a Pleiades poem so well done. The rhythm is a bit odd in places but the choice of T words is very good except that I don't get how the soul can be transported to new heights and then be neither high nor low. Perhaps I am missing something.
Good luck with it
Celyn
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Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Celyn, perhaps one?s soul comes from a place of neutrality wherein experiences can sweep a soul up and back down while being chained to the physical body ? who knows for sure?
Comment from royowen
A nicely written Pleiades poem, and you've done all the right things in the process, and proposed a delicious beverage in the process, a good entry in this contest, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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A nicely written Pleiades poem, and you've done all the right things in the process, and proposed a delicious beverage in the process, a good entry in this contest, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Thanks Roy
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Well done
Comment from harmony13
I found the author's words comforting, descriptive and creative. I often
have a cup of green tea during the day. As the author states tranquil
becomes this time of day. I found the author's words filled with descriptive words conveying a serene atmosphere. The artwork is awesome!
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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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I found the author's words comforting, descriptive and creative. I often
have a cup of green tea during the day. As the author states tranquil
becomes this time of day. I found the author's words filled with descriptive words conveying a serene atmosphere. The artwork is awesome!
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Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Smiles! Friend, all smiles.
