Chomp
Out of the darkness...9 total reviews
Comment from JLR
Dear poet you executed this poetic challenge well. The dark and sinister tone was supported by your well chosen photo and the pace of your stanzas unfolding to the discovery of the alley cafe having a mid plight snack oozed from the page.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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Dear poet you executed this poetic challenge well. The dark and sinister tone was supported by your well chosen photo and the pace of your stanzas unfolding to the discovery of the alley cafe having a mid plight snack oozed from the page.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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Thank you, I appreciate this great review. :)
Comment from jaded831
Unique, well written, a bit scary for my taste, which is no reflection on your poem. You did an excellent job. A story in a poem. Using the C for each line, which sometimes sounds like K, for killer.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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Unique, well written, a bit scary for my taste, which is no reflection on your poem. You did an excellent job. A story in a poem. Using the C for each line, which sometimes sounds like K, for killer.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, this is clever and funny and I loved this cute story with all the attributes of a good kill for the cat, much enjoyed and I reckon your poem will be a winner, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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Ha ha ha, this is clever and funny and I loved this cute story with all the attributes of a good kill for the cat, much enjoyed and I reckon your poem will be a winner, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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Thanks so much for this terrific review. :)
Comment from Wendy G
A well written entry for the Pleiades prompt. Your clever poem told a story, included rhyme, and made good sense! The twist at the end was a bonus to a poem with fine presentation. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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A well written entry for the Pleiades prompt. Your clever poem told a story, included rhyme, and made good sense! The twist at the end was a bonus to a poem with fine presentation. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 08-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2022
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Thanks so much for this nice review. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
This is super clever! Well done mystery writer! Lol. I did not see that coming. Poor mouse. But good just kitty! Our kitty hunts the mice in our house so they know how the mouse in your story feels!
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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This is super clever! Well done mystery writer! Lol. I did not see that coming. Poor mouse. But good just kitty! Our kitty hunts the mice in our house so they know how the mouse in your story feels!
Comment Written 08-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Thank you for this exceptional review, it's so awesome of you. :)
Comment from Faith Williams
I enjoyed the interesting twist at the end of your poem. Wasn't quite expecting that. Thanks for sharing your clever poem, and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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I enjoyed the interesting twist at the end of your poem. Wasn't quite expecting that. Thanks for sharing your clever poem, and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Thank you for this encouraging review, it's very appreciated. :)
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Hello fellow poet. Thank you for sharing your poem, I think you executed well within the rules of the writing prompt. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Thank you, I always appreciate hearing from you. :)
Comment from J L Graves
Well-written poem. I could feel the tension as the poem progressed from line to line. The picture matched the mood and tension within the poem itself. You followed the Pleiades poem format well.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Well-written poem. I could feel the tension as the poem progressed from line to line. The picture matched the mood and tension within the poem itself. You followed the Pleiades poem format well.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Thank you, that's very nice of you to say. :)
Comment from Celyn
This is incredibly descriptive of my ex-feral cat Mungo. The rhyming is good and victim and decision work as a near rhyme so well done. I like the rhythm too.
Good luck with it
Celyn
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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This is incredibly descriptive of my ex-feral cat Mungo. The rhyming is good and victim and decision work as a near rhyme so well done. I like the rhythm too.
Good luck with it
Celyn
Comment Written 08-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2022
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Thank you, I appreciate this great review. :)
