Take a Chance
So glad I listen to my inner voice.6 total reviews
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Harry,
Your poem reminds me of the days long ago when I used to go to dances. I remember slow dancing--that meant a guy was interested.
Your sweet poem is a testament that love at first sight and everlasting love are real and precious.
Congrats on the 60 wonderful years.
Exceptional poem.
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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Harry,
Your poem reminds me of the days long ago when I used to go to dances. I remember slow dancing--that meant a guy was interested.
Your sweet poem is a testament that love at first sight and everlasting love are real and precious.
Congrats on the 60 wonderful years.
Exceptional poem.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 12-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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Thanks again Cindy for your review. I'm hope that the poem brought back good slow dance memories.
Comment from Moonbeams Musings 55
A great poem to read. It brought back so many wonderful memories of high school and the dances. We were all nervous hoping someone would ask us to dance. I love how it ended with the togetherness. Great job.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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A great poem to read. It brought back so many wonderful memories of high school and the dances. We were all nervous hoping someone would ask us to dance. I love how it ended with the togetherness. Great job.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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Thank you for the read and the feedback. Pleased the poem brought back good memories.
Comment from papa55mike
Sometimes that one dance will bring a lifetime of happiness. I'm glad that happened for you. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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Sometimes that one dance will bring a lifetime of happiness. I'm glad that happened for you. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 10-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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Thank you for the read and the feedback. Appreciated.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Take a Chance, follows the challenge rhyme requirements and tells a story of taking that leap of faith and making, what was a dream, a reality. Nice.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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This poem, Take a Chance, follows the challenge rhyme requirements and tells a story of taking that leap of faith and making, what was a dream, a reality. Nice.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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Thanks for the feedback.
Comment from RodG
I think many of us can relate to this experience. So often we had to dare ourselves to "take a chance" on romance.
I like how describe the Speaker's nervousness in the first two stanzas.
Rod
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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I think many of us can relate to this experience. So often we had to dare ourselves to "take a chance" on romance.
I like how describe the Speaker's nervousness in the first two stanzas.
Rod
Comment Written 10-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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Thank you for the read and the feedback.
Comment from Heather Burroughs
Aaahhh, this brought me back to high school. I absolutely love your poem and story! Not many are able to say they're blessed with so many loving years. Thank you for sharing your story. Many blessings to you
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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Aaahhh, this brought me back to high school. I absolutely love your poem and story! Not many are able to say they're blessed with so many loving years. Thank you for sharing your story. Many blessings to you
Comment Written 10-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Heather, for your read and your encouraging feedback. And for the honor of the six stars.
