Catch as Catch Can
a poem8 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a rhyming poem entry that reads like tongue twisters. The text is a great size. The verses in this poem read like separate poems of tongue twisters. There is no clear connection in the text that the poem forms one consistent singular idea.
The visual fits okay. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
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This is a rhyming poem entry that reads like tongue twisters. The text is a great size. The verses in this poem read like separate poems of tongue twisters. There is no clear connection in the text that the poem forms one consistent singular idea.
The visual fits okay. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
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Thanks, Sandra
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You are welcome.
Comment from Mia Twysted
I had a fun time reading this piece. It was like a tongue twister but with a definite flow that helped move the reader along from beginning to end.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
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I had a fun time reading this piece. It was like a tongue twister but with a definite flow that helped move the reader along from beginning to end.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Mia
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
you treated us to a very entertaining blend of internal rhymes and alliteration here, as well as the requested end rhymes. I enjoyed it very much. Kate xx
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
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you treated us to a very entertaining blend of internal rhymes and alliteration here, as well as the requested end rhymes. I enjoyed it very much. Kate xx
Comment Written 15-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Kate.
Comment from Barbara Peabody Pouliot
Very creative, brought me a laugh. Thank you for sharing. Keep Writing and Keep Sharing. I enjoyed your style. Maybe just a little too much blank space at the bottom in its presentation.
Write On
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Very creative, brought me a laugh. Thank you for sharing. Keep Writing and Keep Sharing. I enjoyed your style. Maybe just a little too much blank space at the bottom in its presentation.
Write On
Comment Written 14-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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The bottom seems to change per device used. Thank you, Barbara
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YW. You can still go in and edit if you wish
Comment from royowen
Beautifully written, this alliterate, rhyming poem. The Ps are outstanding, then the Cs and the abab rhyming is likewise great, the Ms, then the Js, and then the Fs, a skilfully written entry in this contest, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Beautifully written, this alliterate, rhyming poem. The Ps are outstanding, then the Cs and the abab rhyming is likewise great, the Ms, then the Js, and then the Fs, a skilfully written entry in this contest, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 14-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Roy.
Comment from Douglas Goff
Oh my you are a creative minded sort aren't you. You are as magical as a unicorn and as undefinable as Bigfoot.
I felt like I was just on the Magnum roller coaster at Cedar Point. Twist, turns, up's, and downs!
From the awesome abstract at the top to the final line that cherries the top of the sundae, this dripped creativity like a three hundred pounder running a 10K.
I hold onto my sixes like a greedy harpy chewing on a cow's thigh bone, but you author, have wrenched it from my steely grip with your brilliant lunacy.
Good work mad genius. Good work!
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Oh my you are a creative minded sort aren't you. You are as magical as a unicorn and as undefinable as Bigfoot.
I felt like I was just on the Magnum roller coaster at Cedar Point. Twist, turns, up's, and downs!
From the awesome abstract at the top to the final line that cherries the top of the sundae, this dripped creativity like a three hundred pounder running a 10K.
I hold onto my sixes like a greedy harpy chewing on a cow's thigh bone, but you author, have wrenched it from my steely grip with your brilliant lunacy.
Good work mad genius. Good work!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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I am honored and so happy that you liked this one, Douglas. Thank you so much for the cherished six.
Comment from Sarah Lefort
I loved reading it outloud. It reminds me of Eminem's rap. I love the rhythm and "musicality" of this poem. I feel like it has to be read outloud to be even more appreciated.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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I loved reading it outloud. It reminds me of Eminem's rap. I love the rhythm and "musicality" of this poem. I feel like it has to be read outloud to be even more appreciated.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Sarah
Comment from Moonbeams Musings 55
This was so quirky and cute. Great rhyme but what a tongue twister. I loved your rhyme and rhyme. This was such fun to read. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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This was so quirky and cute. Great rhyme but what a tongue twister. I loved your rhyme and rhyme. This was such fun to read. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2022
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Thank you, MM
