Comment from royowen

Excellent

Good story John. I struggle when someone becomes so hard they reproduce themselves, as a wild cat teaches its offspring to live in the jungle, if one loses one's humanity, what do they have left. This is a great example of that, thank God for people like Cedric. Beautifully written John unique story, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022

Thank you for a great review, Roy. I appreciate your following my darkness! LOL.

reply by royowen on 16-Nov-2022

Well done Joh, good posy

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

This is going to be a good story, what a horrid thing to do to your own son! What a life for poor Marsha, and Lev! And she has a daughter too, who has been thrown out on the street. The punishments were hard in that country, has no one no sense on right and wrong. I can't wait to see how this story goes on, it's brilliant, John. Well done! :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022

Yes, I did quite a bit of research for this one and what I learned was more cruelty than compassion. Thank you for following, Sandra! I can't get away from my dark side, Sandra! LOL. O well

Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)

Excellent

This is entralling, and holds the reader bound. There is a great deal of incertitude coming through. If Masha is the jailhouse whore, that alone should put a question mark over paternity. Kate xx

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 Comment Written 16-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2022

Thank you Kate for a great review. I won't say whether you're on the mark or not! I'm thankful you are reading.

reply by Katherine M. (k-11) on 16-Nov-2022

No don't! I don't want the suspense to be spoiled. It's just to tell you what reading made me think...