A Prayer for my Child
A Mother's Prayer26 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written Free Form poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and precious picture of the sweet baby. I am so very sorry for your loss! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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This is a very well written Free Form poem you have penned for the writing prompt. You used very good descriptive words and precious picture of the sweet baby. I am so very sorry for your loss! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 17-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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God wanted her back. Thank you for your kind review.
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One day you can see her again when we get to go to Heaven! I have many loved ones there too! I hope you have a wonderful night!
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Thank you, I know.
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love and blessings!
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Thanks!
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love and blessings, Teri
Comment from Barbara Peabody Pouliot
This is absolutely beautiful. So brave of you to share. Thank you so very much for sharing. If I had more sixes I would definitely give you one.
So beautifully written and the picture is precious and beautiful.
I am so proud of you sharing this very deep and very sensitive story.
You are an Amazing person doing all the acts of kindness you do, that FS does not know of. In spite of all your pain, you carry on and continually give of yourself so freely. Thank You.
I am so very honored to call you MY FRIEND.
Your Birthday is right around the corner and I pray many blessings come your way and a continuance of healing. Happy Birthday "My Friend"
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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This is absolutely beautiful. So brave of you to share. Thank you so very much for sharing. If I had more sixes I would definitely give you one.
So beautifully written and the picture is precious and beautiful.
I am so proud of you sharing this very deep and very sensitive story.
You are an Amazing person doing all the acts of kindness you do, that FS does not know of. In spite of all your pain, you carry on and continually give of yourself so freely. Thank You.
I am so very honored to call you MY FRIEND.
Your Birthday is right around the corner and I pray many blessings come your way and a continuance of healing. Happy Birthday "My Friend"
Comment Written 17-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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Thank you for your heartfelt comments. I appreciate your kindness and support. I try my best to give my part. Blessings to you and yours. Thanks for this lovely review.
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💕. Write On
Comment from Dr. Von
I like the gift we are given to read your work and understand a little of the insight you share in your writing. I like your bold release in writing this free-form poem. The flow of your message is good. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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I like the gift we are given to read your work and understand a little of the insight you share in your writing. I like your bold release in writing this free-form poem. The flow of your message is good. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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Dr. Von, thank you for just being a decent and kind reviewer. You know this writing venture is more than just words on paper or a screen. Thank you!
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You are so very welcome. One day I will write a poem about respect and kindness. LOL
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Anything positive sent out into the universe would be great!
Comment from royowen
I'm so sorry that you lost your daughter, but you're right about life being a graduated cylinder in which we can be Dawn too early from it's happening, as in the case of your daughter, beautifully written my friend, this is a great post, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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I'm so sorry that you lost your daughter, but you're right about life being a graduated cylinder in which we can be Dawn too early from it's happening, as in the case of your daughter, beautifully written my friend, this is a great post, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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Roy, thank you for your kind review. It is appreciated.
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Welcome
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Great poem for the contest. I love the way you highlight the "ifness" and shortness of life with the experience of the death of the animal and then relate that to the person you love most--your child. You reveal a mother's heart in this well-crafted poem.
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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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Great poem for the contest. I love the way you highlight the "ifness" and shortness of life with the experience of the death of the animal and then relate that to the person you love most--your child. You reveal a mother's heart in this well-crafted poem.
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Comment Written 17-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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Theo thank you for your review. This is a poem I would love to include in a possible book if I write one.
Comment from Ricky1024
This is a Free Form Contest Entry rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
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Good luck with your contest Entry.
Doctor Ricky
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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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This is a Free Form Contest Entry rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
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Good luck with your contest Entry.
Doctor Ricky
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Ricky, so much for your review.
