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Dear God

A Letter or prayer

4 total reviews 
Comment from Soledadpaz
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You ponder so many questions that many of us do. Why is there incurable disease and how do we show love to others when we are struggling with what our own life brings.

Very well done. Great luck in the contest.

Sol

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
    thank you so so much, its true, and I as a 70 year old, have been through many struggles with family, thank you so much for reading.
Comment from Ricky1024
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This was a well written letter to God.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with your contest Entry.
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2022
    Thank you so much
reply by Ricky1024 on 18-Nov-2022
Comment from J L Graves
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In your writing, I can feel the raw emotion and your vulnerability in speaking to God. It sounds like Faith has been an important part of your journey, and it speaks loudly in this piece. Best wishes to you on your faith journey.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2022
    thank you so much for your review
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry. I enjoyed reading. You've asked God those hard questions that everybody wonders again. When I was diagnosed with breast cancer, I asked God, "Why me?" His answer, "Why not?" Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2022


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2022
    thank you so much for your review