Stories from Morrison
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Comment from lyenochka
That old snake knows a lot of things. Shouldn't he have been plenty full after the frog, mouse and worm? And was that lady Eve? I guess it was the aliens that he ate made him decide to tempt her.
This is a wild story, which I imagine you reading to your grandkids.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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That old snake knows a lot of things. Shouldn't he have been plenty full after the frog, mouse and worm? And was that lady Eve? I guess it was the aliens that he ate made him decide to tempt her.
This is a wild story, which I imagine you reading to your grandkids.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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Ninety-nine percent of the time, this snake saw something as food. I guess apples got a pass.
Comment from Gloria ....
This is a searing indictment of the greed of our throw-away, drug-addicted hedonistic society here. Honestly this is very clever Bill in a zany way, and the snake is of single-minded intention that doesn't seem to be hindered by anything at all. If it's in the house, it's snake food.
Very entertaining. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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This is a searing indictment of the greed of our throw-away, drug-addicted hedonistic society here. Honestly this is very clever Bill in a zany way, and the snake is of single-minded intention that doesn't seem to be hindered by anything at all. If it's in the house, it's snake food.
Very entertaining. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 19-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Gloria. I might be on a parody kick.
Comment from Ricky1024
This chapter was cite and well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
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Thr Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional, while Descriptive Measures Aligned most Perfectly.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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This chapter was cite and well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
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Thr Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional, while Descriptive Measures Aligned most Perfectly.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 18-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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Thanks, Ricky
Comment from Jay Squires
Cute story, Bill, built on the theme of the three little pigs, right? But you added your own inimitable touches, Like the naked lady who walked by the apple tree, to which you noted: "but that's another story." Searched high and low for a "Three Little Pigs" moral here, but failed as I knew I would. This is just a charming and entertaining tale.
Jay
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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Cute story, Bill, built on the theme of the three little pigs, right? But you added your own inimitable touches, Like the naked lady who walked by the apple tree, to which you noted: "but that's another story." Searched high and low for a "Three Little Pigs" moral here, but failed as I knew I would. This is just a charming and entertaining tale.
Jay
Comment Written 18-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Jay.
Comment from nomi338
Handsome Hal had been here before and thus he already knew that the end was nigh. See you next lifetime and next time find a better and safer domicile.
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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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Handsome Hal had been here before and thus he already knew that the end was nigh. See you next lifetime and next time find a better and safer domicile.
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Comment Written 18-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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Here there be snakes.
