Confusion
Life's complexities9 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This senryu, Confusion, has the proper formatting and fnds the individual dealing with self-doubt, and the sense of ineffectiveness to deal with life.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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This senryu, Confusion, has the proper formatting and fnds the individual dealing with self-doubt, and the sense of ineffectiveness to deal with life.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much for your thoughtful words.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Senryu writing prompt contest.
Human change is an inside job.
Good syllables count and connection between lines. Weaver.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy Word
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Excellent entry for the Senryu writing prompt contest.
Human change is an inside job.
Good syllables count and connection between lines. Weaver.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy Word
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Thanks so much Gypsy for your words and good wishes.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The only way to break out of the trap is to remember to be grateful for what we have without striving for the impossible, contentment brings happiness and we sometimes just don't get it, food for thought here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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The only way to break out of the trap is to remember to be grateful for what we have without striving for the impossible, contentment brings happiness and we sometimes just don't get it, food for thought here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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You are exactly right. Thank you very much.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is an excellent Senryu, that deals competenly with the problem of mental challenges. The reader feels that the author really understands the problem. Kate xx
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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This is an excellent Senryu, that deals competenly with the problem of mental challenges. The reader feels that the author really understands the problem. Kate xx
Comment Written 22-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2022
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Thank you Kate. I appreciate your insight.
Comment from Faith Williams
Sometimes the worst prison is inside your own head. Such a short poem that speaks volumes. Well done. Thanks for sharing, and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Sometimes the worst prison is inside your own head. Such a short poem that speaks volumes. Well done. Thanks for sharing, and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Faith, for an understanding and thoughtful review.
Comment from Celyn
This poem is very emotive and I hope that you are not trapped by your differences for life. It fulfills the requirements of a 5-7-5 poem and is certainly about human nature and/or emotions. I can think of nothing in it that I would want to change.
Good luck with it
Celyn
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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This poem is very emotive and I hope that you are not trapped by your differences for life. It fulfills the requirements of a 5-7-5 poem and is certainly about human nature and/or emotions. I can think of nothing in it that I would want to change.
Good luck with it
Celyn
Comment Written 21-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Thank you Celyn for your thoughtful review, and good luck wishes. Fortunately it is not autobiographical. (However, I have seen parents caught when their offspring have sharply differing views - and of course the parent can see both perspectives.)
I wanted the emotion to be more complex than simply "love" or similar.
Comment from Douglas Goff
Very philosophical. I suppose we all feel like that at one point or another.
Very nice color scheme and excellent picture that matches.
Nice work. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Very philosophical. I suppose we all feel like that at one point or another.
Very nice color scheme and excellent picture that matches.
Nice work. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 21-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Thank you Douglas for your thoughtful review.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good senryu. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated. Hopefully, confusion will not be the speaker's life sentence. The visual fits well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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This is a good senryu. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated. Hopefully, confusion will not be the speaker's life sentence. The visual fits well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Thank you for your lovely review and good wishes. I appreciate your thoughtful comments.
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You are welcome.
Comment from lyenochka
That depicts a lot of people who are introverted and trying to work out problems with themselves that they miss out on living and being part of other people's lives. Well said in your senryu poem. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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That depicts a lot of people who are introverted and trying to work out problems with themselves that they miss out on living and being part of other people's lives. Well said in your senryu poem. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 21-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much for your thoughtful review and goosd wishes.
