Little Ballerina.
I've Got To Dance To Keep From Crying...3 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
A very uplifting poem.
It's up to parents and teachers to steer children in the right direction teach them that despite colour of skin or creed we are all Human and part of one big family.
They must cherish and respect and once adults work together in taking care of our planet which feeds us.
In august 2018 at the age of 15 Greta Thunberg began her activism by protesting outside the parliament of Sweden. She understood that our leaders had to open their eyes and stop exploiting our planet resources. But besides screaming at our leaders , what does she do in her own personal way to care for our planet.
Personally I think your ballerina 's words are more significant than Greta's protests because she wants to contribute with her own action in changing this world. She wants to be a tree whose fruits feed the world.
We need children that want to study and become researchers. We need solutions so mankind can feed billions of people without exploiting and destroying our planet though. We all need to do are part with our everyday actions.
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A very uplifting poem.
It's up to parents and teachers to steer children in the right direction teach them that despite colour of skin or creed we are all Human and part of one big family.
They must cherish and respect and once adults work together in taking care of our planet which feeds us.
In august 2018 at the age of 15 Greta Thunberg began her activism by protesting outside the parliament of Sweden. She understood that our leaders had to open their eyes and stop exploiting our planet resources. But besides screaming at our leaders , what does she do in her own personal way to care for our planet.
Personally I think your ballerina 's words are more significant than Greta's protests because she wants to contribute with her own action in changing this world. She wants to be a tree whose fruits feed the world.
We need children that want to study and become researchers. We need solutions so mankind can feed billions of people without exploiting and destroying our planet though. We all need to do are part with our everyday actions.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2022
Comment from Ricky1024
"I've Got to Dance room Keep on Crying"
This is a Conservation Contest Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
Good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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"I've Got to Dance room Keep on Crying"
This is a Conservation Contest Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
Good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
Comment from Julie G1
Well done. This poem clearly conveyed the poet's message, of inspiration and hope. Let's all give peace and tolerance a chance! The poet's choice of language and rhyming was apt. The use of the graphic worked well for this reader. I hope you keep on writing such verse.
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Well done. This poem clearly conveyed the poet's message, of inspiration and hope. Let's all give peace and tolerance a chance! The poet's choice of language and rhyming was apt. The use of the graphic worked well for this reader. I hope you keep on writing such verse.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
