The Crimson Journal
It all began with an unexpected discovery2 total reviews
Comment from Ricky1024
"The Crimson Journal"
A horror writing prompt contest Entry.
Was well written rich in theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with your Contest Entry.
Doctor Ricky1024
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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"The Crimson Journal"
A horror writing prompt contest Entry.
Was well written rich in theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with your Contest Entry.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment Written 25-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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thank you
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Well, Johnathan, this is way too long a story and also you didn't mention in your title or the line above it that this was a horror story. You need to list this as horror so that people like me who don't like horror stories will avoid these posts. Also, the print size is too small and the paragraphs are too long.
Jesse
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Well, Johnathan, this is way too long a story and also you didn't mention in your title or the line above it that this was a horror story. You need to list this as horror so that people like me who don't like horror stories will avoid these posts. Also, the print size is too small and the paragraphs are too long.
Jesse
Comment Written 25-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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I understand. Thanks for the feedback!
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Glad I could help.
