Magic potion
What could be in this15 total reviews
Comment from karenina
Hmmm. You ought to book a slot on Shark Tank! I'm already lining up to purchase this provocative potion! Heaven knows nothing else coaxes my muse from her slumber ~ or should I say coma! Perfect theme for this writing prompt!
Karenina
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
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Hmmm. You ought to book a slot on Shark Tank! I'm already lining up to purchase this provocative potion! Heaven knows nothing else coaxes my muse from her slumber ~ or should I say coma! Perfect theme for this writing prompt!
Karenina
Comment Written 25-Nov-2023
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2023
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Ah my imagination went a bit crazy there! Thank you again. It's a joy reading all your reviews.
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Imagination is the garden of our minds!
Wow! Thanks for taking your valuable time and commenting on each review!
Big Hugs!
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My absolute pleasure and delight. And I have enjoyed looking back over some pieces I had forgotten.
Wendy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I want to order the same drink please? Ha ha ha, this is a fun write and a drink can indeed lift our spirits and spark those old brain cells into action, much enjoyed Wendy, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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I want to order the same drink please? Ha ha ha, this is a fun write and a drink can indeed lift our spirits and spark those old brain cells into action, much enjoyed Wendy, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022
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Lol. Thank you so much Dolly. Super review. Unfortunately, I have forgotten the ingredients!
Wendy
Comment from Paul McFarland
Pretty good, Wendy. I think you would have done better in the contest if your meter was better. The content was excellent. It sounds like the drink might have had some alcohol in it.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Pretty good, Wendy. I think you would have done better in the contest if your meter was better. The content was excellent. It sounds like the drink might have had some alcohol in it.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Thank you Paul for reviewing. You do remember that metre is not my best friend?! It runs away when it sees me coming.
Unfortunately, I don't remember the ingredients! Lol. Now that could be the result of the alcohol in it, or simply the effect of my having spent many years on this planet! NOW how will I market this and make my fortune?
Wendy
Comment from Mary Shifman
Yep, I would love the recipe for her creative potion! I'm sure you could make a fortune. After all, I'm sure most writers have times when they can't get inspired. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Yep, I would love the recipe for her creative potion! I'm sure you could make a fortune. After all, I'm sure most writers have times when they can't get inspired. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Thank you Mary! What a super review! Thanks too for your good wishes.
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You are welcome.
Comment from June Sargent
Whatever it is, if it gets the creative juices flowing- it would make you rich! This was a very creative and original approach on the subject of drink. A bit of humor thrown in as well. Should be a contender!
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Whatever it is, if it gets the creative juices flowing- it would make you rich! This was a very creative and original approach on the subject of drink. A bit of humor thrown in as well. Should be a contender!
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Thank you June! A super review.
Comment from Sherry SG
I enjoyed this poem with its funny ending. Not very satisfying though to not know the secret recipe -- haha, just kidding. Nice work.
I felt the ellipsis was overused and could be omitted in most of the lines as it's somewhat distracting and doesn't really enhance the poem.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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I enjoyed this poem with its funny ending. Not very satisfying though to not know the secret recipe -- haha, just kidding. Nice work.
I felt the ellipsis was overused and could be omitted in most of the lines as it's somewhat distracting and doesn't really enhance the poem.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much Sherry for your kind review. I have taken your suggestion on board; I think you are right. Appreciated.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Well-written poem. Love reading it. The potion will work wonders, but not always positive results. It can do lots of things to your mind; they say it is a magical liquid. In Alice in Wonderland, I think it shrunk Alice.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Well-written poem. Love reading it. The potion will work wonders, but not always positive results. It can do lots of things to your mind; they say it is a magical liquid. In Alice in Wonderland, I think it shrunk Alice.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much, Rosemary. I appreciate your kind review!
Comment from Moonbeams Musings 55
What a fun poem. I love the flow and your rhyme. I imagine a lot of writers can relate to not being able to think of anything to write and wished they could find a magic potion. Great poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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What a fun poem. I love the flow and your rhyme. I imagine a lot of writers can relate to not being able to think of anything to write and wished they could find a magic potion. Great poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much. Love your review!
Comment from jessizero
I need that recipe! LOL. I enjoyed your story/poem. I have been struggling with writer's block for a while now. Thank you so much for sharing this, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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I need that recipe! LOL. I enjoyed your story/poem. I have been struggling with writer's block for a while now. Thank you so much for sharing this, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Thank you Jessi! Yes, I think there is a niche market for this drink! Lol. I appreciate the review.
Comment from royowen
I think if anyone can produce or create anything that will better oneself, whatever interpretation one puts on it, it will certainly sell, and not only that it will prosper. This is a great work my friend, an excellent write, good rhyming and theme, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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I think if anyone can produce or create anything that will better oneself, whatever interpretation one puts on it, it will certainly sell, and not only that it will prosper. This is a great work my friend, an excellent write, good rhyming and theme, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2022
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Thank you Roy! Great review.
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Most welcome
