Comment from Anne Johnston

Excellent

I love your verse. With the price of groceries in the stores, there will be many who are in need. Thank you for reminding us that we all should do our part to make their Christmas a merry one.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022

Thank you for this great review. :)

reply by Anne Johnston on 01-Dec-2022

You are welcome

Comment from jaded831

Excellent

Excellent write, let us hope people take your words to heart. My sister and I donate money to charity instead of buying gifts for one another. Giving should be done all year. But on Christmas she donates to my favorite the local food kitchen and I give to hers Covenant House.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022

You and your sister are awesome, thanks for what you do. If everyone were like you, it would be a better world. Thanks so much for reading my poem. :)

Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig

Excellent

This is a good Lune poetry contest entry. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated and expresses a good sentiment. Yes, we need to help those who are less fortunate.
The visual fits well. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022

Thanks for this terrific review. :)

reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 30-Nov-2022

You are welcome.

Comment from Karyn2

Excellent

Yes! In few words you have spoken right to the heart of Christmas. The season of giving. I liked your use of rhyme too within these few powerfully simple words.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022

Thanks so much for this encouraging review. :)

Comment from WriterHeather

Exceptional

Love the message here. Its important to remember just what these donations do. Without food people will starve. It should be a basic human right that everyone is fed. Especially babies and children

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022

Thanks so much for this exceptional review, have a great day. :)

Comment from Theodore McDowell

Excellent

nice response to the prompt and a very nice lune. A great sentiment for the Christmas season. Well done, and I hope you have a great holiday season!!!!

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022

Thanks so much for this nice review. :)

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This lune poem, Donate, presented with the proper formatting, reminds the readers to donate to food pantries or help out at feeding programs. We all need food.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2022

Thanks for this great review.:)