Dawn concert
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Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh, what a sweet lune! I think that sunrise birdsong is about the most joyous sound of the day, yet song folks I know complain about it like it's a racket! If you can believe it! Nicely done! Best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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Oh, what a sweet lune! I think that sunrise birdsong is about the most joyous sound of the day, yet song folks I know complain about it like it's a racket! If you can believe it! Nicely done! Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 01-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much Dawn. I agree - it's a pleasure to hear them in the early morning, with fresh cool air and no other sounds.
Wendy
(It placed third.)
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:) Congratulations!
Comment from Mary Shifman
Your charming poem and the accompanying picture, remind me of spring which is particularly nice with winter coming on. I've never written a Lune. I think I'll see if I can some up with something as nice. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
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Your charming poem and the accompanying picture, remind me of spring which is particularly nice with winter coming on. I've never written a Lune. I think I'll see if I can some up with something as nice. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
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Thank you Mary. I am glad you enjoyed it. Where I live we are enjoying spring. Thank you too for your good wishes.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a beautifully worded Lune poetry contest entry. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated. I especially like your last line.
The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
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This is a beautifully worded Lune poetry contest entry. The text is a great size. The message is clearly stated. I especially like your last line.
The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
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Thank you Sandra, both for your review and for your good wishes! You are always very encouraging.
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Thanks, I try to be. You are welcome.
Comment from moonsunrise
Just looking at your glorious picture allowed me to hear the concert. Oftentimes I just sit and listen to the birds in the morning.
Such simplicity ignites a spark in one's soul.
God's gift to mankind. As you state;
"Sunrise Choir Delights".
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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Just looking at your glorious picture allowed me to hear the concert. Oftentimes I just sit and listen to the birds in the morning.
Such simplicity ignites a spark in one's soul.
God's gift to mankind. As you state;
"Sunrise Choir Delights".
Comment Written 29-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much. Those still mornings, fresh and cool, with just the sounds of birds, are truly beautiful moments.
Comment from royowen
This is a great entry in this contest my friend, a wonderful look at the joy that comes through creatures of beauty, such a wonderful upbeat lune poem, it gets my vote, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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This is a great entry in this contest my friend, a wonderful look at the joy that comes through creatures of beauty, such a wonderful upbeat lune poem, it gets my vote, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much! Your very kind words are encouraging.
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Most welcome
Comment from Sally Law
Beautifully penned an illustrated poem in this form for the contest, mystery poet. I love the birdsong and it's perfect for poetry like this.
Sending along my very best today as always, and my very best for the upcoming contest.
Sally :))
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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Beautifully penned an illustrated poem in this form for the contest, mystery poet. I love the birdsong and it's perfect for poetry like this.
Sending along my very best today as always, and my very best for the upcoming contest.
Sally :))
Comment Written 29-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much Sally for you very kind, encouraging review.
Comment from Faith Williams
I like the idea of the sunrise choir and waking to its joyful song. I once read somewhere (not sure if it's true or not), but birds sing first thing in the morning to let others know they lasted the night. Thanks for sharing, and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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I like the idea of the sunrise choir and waking to its joyful song. I once read somewhere (not sure if it's true or not), but birds sing first thing in the morning to let others know they lasted the night. Thanks for sharing, and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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Thanks so much for the lively review, Faith. That is an interesting thought!
Comment from Karyn2
"Sunrise choir delights!" I've this line so much. I'll never forget my wedding day 20 years ago when I woke to the warbling of so many birds. It truly was a choir!! What a beautiful lune you created with outstanding word choices.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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"Sunrise choir delights!" I've this line so much. I'll never forget my wedding day 20 years ago when I woke to the warbling of so many birds. It truly was a choir!! What a beautiful lune you created with outstanding word choices.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much. I am very glad this one brought back some beautiful memories for you.
