Winter Brides
a lune 5-3-511 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
What a wonderful metaphor of the pine trees dressed in snow and looking like white-gowned brides. Beautifully expressed and congratulations on the win!
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2022
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What a wonderful metaphor of the pine trees dressed in snow and looking like white-gowned brides. Beautifully expressed and congratulations on the win!
Comment Written 10-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2022
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Thank you, Helen, for your kind words.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
A very beautifully written lune. A very nice overall presentation. Your Photo compliments your words quite nicely. Congrats on winning the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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A very beautifully written lune. A very nice overall presentation. Your Photo compliments your words quite nicely. Congrats on winning the contest.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind words and the six stars! You made my day. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
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Your welcome
Comment from Anne Johnston
"white crystal dresses
glittering--
pine trees clothed as brides"
Great job on this Lune for the contest. I love the picture you have chosen, and your words so aptly describe it.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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"white crystal dresses
glittering--
pine trees clothed as brides"
Great job on this Lune for the contest. I love the picture you have chosen, and your words so aptly describe it.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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So glad you liked it. It's an awesome feeling when you can find a picture to fit what you've written. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation.
-You wrote a good lune with a good topic.
-Effective imagery with "crystal dresses,"
followed by a vivid, descriptive adjective.
-A very good comparison and concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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-Nice image and presentation.
-You wrote a good lune with a good topic.
-Effective imagery with "crystal dresses,"
followed by a vivid, descriptive adjective.
-A very good comparison and concluding line.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I rarely write and less seldom read lunes, and haiku and little works of poetry because FanStory requires one hundred and fifty characters in this comment box and that is why I have written so long to say so little other than I liked Winter Brides. Where did you get the picture? I usually use my own photographs taken when I viewed my camera as a friend.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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I rarely write and less seldom read lunes, and haiku and little works of poetry because FanStory requires one hundred and fifty characters in this comment box and that is why I have written so long to say so little other than I liked Winter Brides. Where did you get the picture? I usually use my own photographs taken when I viewed my camera as a friend.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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Lol. Sometimes it's hard to know what to say, but I look at whether the imagery in the written word is able to stand on its own without the picture. Or I comment on word choice.
As to the picture, I believe it came from free-images.com. There are a few places I look when I can't find what I'm looking for on FanArt.
Thanks for taking the time to read and comment.
Comment from Thomas Blanks
This is an interesting idea. The imagery of your poem is perfectly illustrated by the photo you included. Sometimes including the right illustration or photo makes all the difference.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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This is an interesting idea. The imagery of your poem is perfectly illustrated by the photo you included. Sometimes including the right illustration or photo makes all the difference.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
Comment from Wendy G
That's a beautiful image to accomany your well written Lune for the contest, and the presentation is excellent. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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That's a beautiful image to accomany your well written Lune for the contest, and the presentation is excellent. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 29-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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Thanks so much, Wendy. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
Comment from Sally Law
This is such as lovely lune poem and seem to sparkle all by itself. The visuals are great and add to your fine offering. Sending you my best today as always and my best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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This is such as lovely lune poem and seem to sparkle all by itself. The visuals are great and add to your fine offering. Sending you my best today as always and my best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))
Comment Written 29-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a beautifully worded Lune poetry contest entry. The text is a good size. The message is clearly stated. I love the imagery you paint with your words. It made me view the snow-covered pines differently. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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This is a beautifully worded Lune poetry contest entry. The text is a good size. The message is clearly stated. I love the imagery you paint with your words. It made me view the snow-covered pines differently. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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So glad you liked it. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Karyn2
Ooh I love the image of "white crystal dresses glittering" very descriptive and poetic. It is just what they remind me of dressed in snow. Very well done with excellent word choices.
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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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Ooh I love the image of "white crystal dresses glittering" very descriptive and poetic. It is just what they remind me of dressed in snow. Very well done with excellent word choices.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.
