Wyoming Ways
Part 1 adventure4 total reviews
Comment from Mary Shifman
This is an interesting story and it kept me reading to the end. I was glad to realize that this post is just the first installment and there is more to follow. I look forward to reading Chapter 2.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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This is an interesting story and it kept me reading to the end. I was glad to realize that this post is just the first installment and there is more to follow. I look forward to reading Chapter 2.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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thanks ? the research was a huge challenged
- Jerry Smith (Lobber)
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You are welcome.
Comment from Ricky1024
This story was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned most Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing and have a Blessed week.
Doctor Ricky1024
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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This story was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
...
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned most Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing and have a Blessed week.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment Written 30-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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thanks ? the research was a huge challenged
- Jerry Smith (Lobber)
Comment from jmdg1954
Wow. You had me basically at word one. I've been away from FanStory for 6 years and just re-enrolled this week. I am so glad I stumbled onto your chapter 1 and can't wait for chapter two.
Personally I could've done without the sexual interaction between Ace & Jeffery, but that's just me.
I am going to 'fan' you so I know when there is a new post.
Excellently done, John
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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Wow. You had me basically at word one. I've been away from FanStory for 6 years and just re-enrolled this week. I am so glad I stumbled onto your chapter 1 and can't wait for chapter two.
Personally I could've done without the sexual interaction between Ace & Jeffery, but that's just me.
I am going to 'fan' you so I know when there is a new post.
Excellently done, John
Comment Written 30-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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thanks ? welcome back John ? glad you enjoyed the read ? the research was a huge challenge
- Jerry Smith (Lobber)
Comment from prettybluebirds
Your story is interesting and fun to read. I learned a lot of words I never knew by reading your story. You could leave out one of the (nows) in the sentence Steve, as he was (now) called, was (now) living... You can leave out one of the nows. It sounds better than using the same word so close together. Otherwise, it is perfect. I wish you the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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Your story is interesting and fun to read. I learned a lot of words I never knew by reading your story. You could leave out one of the (nows) in the sentence Steve, as he was (now) called, was (now) living... You can leave out one of the nows. It sounds better than using the same word so close together. Otherwise, it is perfect. I wish you the best in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2022
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thanks ? the research was a huge challenge ? you?re right - too many )nows(
- Jerry Smith (Lobber)
