Your Mouth is Cashing Checks
It's easy to act the hero - It's harder to be one.2 total reviews
Comment from Ricky1024
This Western Writing Contest entry was well written rich and theme and imagery..
It also, read well and Flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
Perfect wording in that style back then.
Also, Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned most Perfectly.
Good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky1024
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2022
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This Western Writing Contest entry was well written rich and theme and imagery..
It also, read well and Flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
Perfect wording in that style back then.
Also, Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures Aligned most Perfectly.
Good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment Written 30-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
Captures the setting, language and plot of the traditional Western. The tone is ironic and satirises the traditional 'hero'. It uses the stereotypical narrative and setting to humorous effect. Might have had a smaller cast as the reader struggles at times to identify all the speakers.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
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Captures the setting, language and plot of the traditional Western. The tone is ironic and satirises the traditional 'hero'. It uses the stereotypical narrative and setting to humorous effect. Might have had a smaller cast as the reader struggles at times to identify all the speakers.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2022
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Thanks for your comments and suggestions.
