Heading Home
5-7-5 for the contest11 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
HI June,
This is a wonderful sentiment and so true. Love always brings you home.
I love the artwork.
Congrats on placing second in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day.
Joan
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HI June,
This is a wonderful sentiment and so true. Love always brings you home.
I love the artwork.
Congrats on placing second in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day.
Joan
Comment Written 01-Aug-2023
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written 5 7 5 poem. Lovely photo to compliment your words as well. Nice overall presentation. Good luck in the contest. Nicely done.
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This is a beautifully written 5 7 5 poem. Lovely photo to compliment your words as well. Nice overall presentation. Good luck in the contest. Nicely done.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2022
Comment from Faith Williams
Such a lovely poem--love the idea of love drawing us home and the idea of heartbeats as measurement.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
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Such a lovely poem--love the idea of love drawing us home and the idea of heartbeats as measurement.
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2022
Comment from Mark D. R.
June,
Truest words are what you have composed for this contest entry. Your selected photo draws us along that pathway of life. Of course, this poem might be written for an equine too as it returns to its stable (-;
Mark
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June,
Truest words are what you have composed for this contest entry. Your selected photo draws us along that pathway of life. Of course, this poem might be written for an equine too as it returns to its stable (-;
Mark
Comment Written 01-Dec-2022
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An endearing write June and we all love our homes as it is a place we feel comfortable and loved and we always yearn to return, an ambient write, love Dolly x
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An endearing write June and we all love our homes as it is a place we feel comfortable and loved and we always yearn to return, an ambient write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Dec-2022
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Heading Home, has the proper formatting and finds the trip back home to be one of memory plus anticipation, which paves the way back to one's home sweet home.
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This 5-7-5, Heading Home, has the proper formatting and finds the trip back home to be one of memory plus anticipation, which paves the way back to one's home sweet home.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2022
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Well done! I love the economy of your words. Each one precise and full of purpose. Your words pull us in and pull us home. Thanks for sharing your poetry.
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Well done! I love the economy of your words. Each one precise and full of purpose. Your words pull us in and pull us home. Thanks for sharing your poetry.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2022
Comment from Debbie Pope
I like this, Dawn. You draw my heart with your moving words. I like every word, but I particularly like the first line. It's unusual and very poetic.
This is the perfect holiday poem.
Well done, my friend.
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I like this, Dawn. You draw my heart with your moving words. I like every word, but I particularly like the first line. It's unusual and very poetic.
This is the perfect holiday poem.
Well done, my friend.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2022
Comment from RodG
This poem succinctly states what is true for most of us. As we get closer to home, our hearts beat faster and love pumps through our veins. A perfect artwork chosen to accompany your poem. Rod
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This poem succinctly states what is true for most of us. As we get closer to home, our hearts beat faster and love pumps through our veins. A perfect artwork chosen to accompany your poem. Rod
Comment Written 01-Dec-2022
Comment from jmdg1954
Yes, the anticipation. The excitement. The nervousness. The fulfillment of returning home.
It can be from anywhere :
Military service, long vacation, college, prison. Whichever it may be, to think of the feeling of home once you open that front door is exciting.
Best of luck in the contest,
Cheer, John
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Yes, the anticipation. The excitement. The nervousness. The fulfillment of returning home.
It can be from anywhere :
Military service, long vacation, college, prison. Whichever it may be, to think of the feeling of home once you open that front door is exciting.
Best of luck in the contest,
Cheer, John
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2022
