Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

This is a good chapter in you story. The walkers are able to outsmart the dealers in slave trade and get the girl. Im enjoying reading this story. I'm glad they were able to recue Prisha.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2023

Hi, Beth. Thank you for your kind words! We're about to the end.

Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

Comment from estory

Excellent

You've created a story of good and evil in the spiritual world that is told very much in human terms. There's an action and adventure air about this; but I'm not sure if you really fit into a particular genre. It's too adult for teens, with all those references to sexual abuse and slavery, but too much like a comic book for adults. I think you have to decide which genre you want to be in. This sounds like a great story for teens, but if you want it to be that, then you have to cut some of these provocative scenes. estory

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023

Thanks again!

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

I've not been around for a while, I was afraid I wouldn't know what to expect. But thankfully, I must have joined in at just the right moment when they save Prisha. Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023

Thanks again!

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Thank you for this post Mike. You are a good guy, I like the way Cak is described, I remember when 185,000 soldiers were disposed by one single Angel when Hezekiah was on the throne in Judah, it should be easy with these guys, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Typo : (Miicheal) smiles. Michael? 2: (Glady)? my friend.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023

Thanks again! I'll get that fixed.

reply by royowen on 13-Jan-2023

Most welcome

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

I have been crafting a story much like this with demons and angels as main characters. I have read everything written by Frank Peretti and love The Screwtape Letters by C.S. Lewis. I see you like this kind of writing too. The spiritual realm, both good and evil spirits, are always vying for the souls of mankind. Delightful read for my day. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023

Hi, Sally. I read one of your chapters, and it was terrific. Thank you for your kind words!

Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

"Prisha's Freedom"
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
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Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned most Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing and have a blessed day.
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2023

Thanks again!