I See the Seafoam
The tsunami in Lituya Bay from the ocean's point of view.43 total reviews
Comment from irishauthorme
I was intrigued by your poem and looked up the 1958 7.7 earthquake on the FairWeather fault in southeast Alaska that caused the huge rockfall and created a tsunami 1720' high, the largest ever recorded. Five people lost their lives and the damage was tremendous.
There was seafoam in the streets.
Good work,
irish
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I was intrigued by your poem and looked up the 1958 7.7 earthquake on the FairWeather fault in southeast Alaska that caused the huge rockfall and created a tsunami 1720' high, the largest ever recorded. Five people lost their lives and the damage was tremendous.
There was seafoam in the streets.
Good work,
irish
Comment Written 01-Dec-2022
Comment from prettybluebirds
You have several computer glitches throughout your writing. Those darn things tend to show up when we post writing from a word processor. It is a delightful poem, just needs a little editing.
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You have several computer glitches throughout your writing. Those darn things tend to show up when we post writing from a word processor. It is a delightful poem, just needs a little editing.
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Comment Written 01-Dec-2022
Comment from Janet Foor
An interesting a creative poem from the seas point of view.
Excellent use of alliteration which plays on the waves of the ocean and the personification of the waves is well done.
Blessings
Janet
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An interesting a creative poem from the seas point of view.
Excellent use of alliteration which plays on the waves of the ocean and the personification of the waves is well done.
Blessings
Janet
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Comment Written 01-Dec-2022
