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My Last Call

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5 total reviews 
Comment from jessizero
Excellent
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I really, really love this post! God giving your narrator "the look" was hilarious. Thank you so much for sharing this "last call." Best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2022

reply by the author on 08-Dec-2022
    Thank you for the fantastic review, Jessi. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.

    :)

    Ron
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Excellent
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Short and sweet ... oh yeah, that was one rule, one hundred words, wasn't it. You've done well, my FanStory friend. Keep on truckin' forward. ..............................

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2022

reply by the author on 07-Dec-2022
    Thank you for the great review, Tom I really the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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HAHAHAHAHA. I love this whimsical take on an otherwise kind of super sad contest! Thanks for the laugh that was, thankfully, interspersed among a lot of tears as I read the other entries.

I hope you do well, and I hope you can boogie down to the winner's circle!! Your sense of humor is fabulous...though you choice of wives?...Not quite as good...

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2022

reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
    Haha. Thank you so much for the great review, Rache. Yes, I knew most of them were going to be the typical with a contest like this. I doubt it'll do any good. People on this site seem to love downer crap. Lol. Who knows? Sometimes my dumb stuff flies. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this ridiculousness. Thank you again.
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Excellent
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Great short flash fiction for the prompt entry. It was humorous and tragic at the same time. I love the last line: God was giving me the look. Well done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2022

reply by the author on 02-Dec-2022
    Thank you for the great review, Theodore. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from Faith Williams
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

So bad, but it's so good! Made me laugh. Great story. Loved the last line of God giving you 'the look.' Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2022

reply by the author on 02-Dec-2022
    Thank you so much for the fantastic review and giant sixer, Faith. I really appreciate the generous rating and good luck wishes. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silly piece. Have yourself a great weekend and thank you again.