Family Tree
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Comment from Dawn Munro
wirl -- spelling = whirl
Wow, you have a cattery! (Blessing upon blessing!) And you did a wonderful job of describing their individual personalities in your sweet poem -- non-cat people just don't get it, do they? There are similarities, but every cat has its own traits. :))
Nicely done! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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wirl -- spelling = whirl
Wow, you have a cattery! (Blessing upon blessing!) And you did a wonderful job of describing their individual personalities in your sweet poem -- non-cat people just don't get it, do they? There are similarities, but every cat has its own traits. :))
Nicely done! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 04-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much for your review
Comment from Wendy G
Wow, you have a lot of cats, each with their own distinctive personality and characteristics. They obviously bring much joy and delight. Well done on incorporating them all into your poem. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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Wow, you have a lot of cats, each with their own distinctive personality and characteristics. They obviously bring much joy and delight. Well done on incorporating them all into your poem. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 04-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
A cute poem about your kitties. A person can get attached to their pets for sure. When you take care of them night and day, loving them comes pretty easy and simple.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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A cute poem about your kitties. A person can get attached to their pets for sure. When you take care of them night and day, loving them comes pretty easy and simple.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
The illustration is great! The different cats and their characteristics are humorously described. The reader can imagine their particular foibles! I think it would be a good idea to proof check your writing, especially the use of the apostrope, as in 'footballers' wives'. Check spelling too as in 'tries'. Nevertheless it's great fun!
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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The illustration is great! The different cats and their characteristics are humorously described. The reader can imagine their particular foibles! I think it would be a good idea to proof check your writing, especially the use of the apostrope, as in 'footballers' wives'. Check spelling too as in 'tries'. Nevertheless it's great fun!
Comment Written 03-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Family Tree, introduces the readers to this lovely family of cats who are surely named after the sense that they give off to their mom. Mia, Diamond, Pandora, Mr. Brown, Duchess, Popcorn, and OT seem to be a neat group.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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This poem, Family Tree, introduces the readers to this lovely family of cats who are surely named after the sense that they give off to their mom. Mia, Diamond, Pandora, Mr. Brown, Duchess, Popcorn, and OT seem to be a neat group.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Ricky1024
It's always nice to honor our very friends as they give us unconditional love.
This was cute, as well written rich in theme and Imagery.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional.
Good luck with your Contest Entry.
Doctor Ricky1024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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It's always nice to honor our very friends as they give us unconditional love.
This was cute, as well written rich in theme and Imagery.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional.
Good luck with your Contest Entry.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment Written 02-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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Thank you
Comment from prettybluebirds
It sounds like you have a lot of cats. I like the photo you included with your writing. It adds much to the meaning of the words. Your poem is well-written. I wish you tons of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2022
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It sounds like you have a lot of cats. I like the photo you included with your writing. It adds much to the meaning of the words. Your poem is well-written. I wish you tons of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2022
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Thank you : )
The photo is of one of the cats
