Colours and patterns
The kaleidoscope of days10 total reviews
Comment from LJbutterfly
Chocolate is not a meal? They never told me. That's why I had to join Weight Watchers. Haha! The activities of your day compared to a kaleidoscope with various colored font, is creative and humorous. Funniest to me...Housework! No! Rotate again. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
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Chocolate is not a meal? They never told me. That's why I had to join Weight Watchers. Haha! The activities of your day compared to a kaleidoscope with various colored font, is creative and humorous. Funniest to me...Housework! No! Rotate again. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
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Lol. Thanks so much for a great review! Also for the good wishes.
Wendy
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet, you now have 4 votes.
In all honesty you had me hooked as soon as I read your first sentence.. my pets are my alarm clock also and their needs come first.
Most of your other activities I do too except I don't have grandchildren nor children of my own.
My pets keep me on my toes!
I like to review on fanstory.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
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Ciao mystery poet, you now have 4 votes.
In all honesty you had me hooked as soon as I read your first sentence.. my pets are my alarm clock also and their needs come first.
Most of your other activities I do too except I don't have grandchildren nor children of my own.
My pets keep me on my toes!
I like to review on fanstory.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind review! Pets and their needs must be our priority. They are vulnerable and dependant on our care for their comfort and well- being, but they make us rich with their love and loyalty. Thank you too for your vote. That's wonderful too.
Comment from Karyn2
I liked the creative use of the kaleidoscope to walk us through your day. It does sound like a day full and colourful! A lovely contribution...I may just have had chocolate as a meal shhhh.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
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I liked the creative use of the kaleidoscope to walk us through your day. It does sound like a day full and colourful! A lovely contribution...I may just have had chocolate as a meal shhhh.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
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Thanks so much for your encouraging review. Much appreciated. (I won't tell anyone about the chocolate. Lol.)
Comment from Sherry SG
This was a lovely and creative piece. I loved the whole metaphor of the Kaleidoscope - I have used the metaphor in some of my writing (not on this website). I enjoyed reading this.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
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This was a lovely and creative piece. I loved the whole metaphor of the Kaleidoscope - I have used the metaphor in some of my writing (not on this website). I enjoyed reading this.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind and encouraging review! I appreciate it. Yes, I wanted to be different, not just list my day's activities. Thanks again.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
What a happy serene life you lead. I find it interesting that the housework, not only is black, but only gets a single line - less likely to be seen so will be ignored ! sensible. Kate xx
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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What a happy serene life you lead. I find it interesting that the housework, not only is black, but only gets a single line - less likely to be seen so will be ignored ! sensible. Kate xx
Comment Written 03-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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Yes, let's rush past housework! Low on my priority list. One can always keep shaking that kaleidoscope until one gets a satisfactory and pleasing pattern. (Not literally of course. I hope that using a metaphor won't disqualify me!) Thanks for a super review.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Sounds like a day of many adventures. I am not sure I would use a kaleidoscope. But it is a colorful idea. I would have to create a to-do list so I could get my favorites done first thing in the morning.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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Sounds like a day of many adventures. I am not sure I would use a kaleidoscope. But it is a colorful idea. I would have to create a to-do list so I could get my favorites done first thing in the morning.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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Lol. Thank you Rosemary. Yes, it's just a type of metaphor for prioritising - although the activities are real enough.
Comment from prettybluebirds
Your story is cute, and the kaleidoscope idea is the most creative. Your artwork adds a lot to the meaning of your words, too. In short, it is very well done. I wish you the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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Your story is cute, and the kaleidoscope idea is the most creative. Your artwork adds a lot to the meaning of your words, too. In short, it is very well done. I wish you the best in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much for your lovely review. Very thoughtful, and much appreciated.
Comment from RodG
I like the kaleidoscope metaphor you use to describe your day. Indeed you seem to have a variety of choices of what to do. Nice that there's usually time for FanStory. Rod
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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I like the kaleidoscope metaphor you use to describe your day. Indeed you seem to have a variety of choices of what to do. Nice that there's usually time for FanStory. Rod
Comment Written 02-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much Rod. I am glad you enjoyed this one.
Comment from Ricky1024
This is a type of day writing prompt entry, rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Good luck with your contest Entry.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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This is a type of day writing prompt entry, rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Good luck with your contest Entry.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 02-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much for your thoughts about this one, and also your good wishes. Appreciated.
Comment from Douglas Goff
This is a wonderfully refreshing approach to the contest prompt.
I enjoyed the wonderful color scheme and stimulating words.
Thank you for sharing and good luck!
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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This is a wonderfully refreshing approach to the contest prompt.
I enjoyed the wonderful color scheme and stimulating words.
Thank you for sharing and good luck!
Comment Written 02-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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Thank you Douglas. Your review is VERY encouraging, and appreciated, as also are the good wishes.
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Nice work!
