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Do good and feel good poems

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Comment from LateBloomer
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Hi Debi, your pen is beautifully penned in the heart and spirit of Christmas. I especially liked:

Love each other all year long, like the Joy of Christmas morn

(And if we could, what a beautiful world it would be.)

Silky rhyming. Great sensory appeal. Perfect photo. Well done.
A pleasure to read. Xo. M

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2022
    Thank you so much Margaret for your lovely review and words for this poem. I appreciate it so very much. Just as I do your generous six stars to go along with your kindness. Thanks again my dear friend!
Comment from nomi338
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Seasons of joy bring out the best in writers who write with joy at most times. It could even be said that some writers were born for times like these. Joyful times like Christmas seems to bring out the creativity in them.

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
    No wonder we are such great friends! We think so much alike. Of course it helps when we have the same Father and best friend in Jesus! How can you not be joyful? It makes me thankful just to hear from you! God bless you Nomi. I was so blessed the day God put you in my life❣️
reply by nomi338 on 04-Dec-2022
    Bless you.
Comment from Ricky1024
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Jesus is a Perfect Being and Grand subject to write and promote.
Each Sabbath Sunday for many years, Beautiful poetry honoring the Real King.
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Jesus the Christ tortured, hair and beard pulled, spat upon, ridiculously and cruelly tortured then Cricified.
Crown of thorns adorned His sweet head.
Painted the ground below Crimson red.
Resurrection back from the dead
Doctor Ricky1024

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
    Thanks so much Ricky for your beautifully written poem of our mutual Savior!
    It's the Season to find your joy and in the New Year out it all into practice throughout the year. I enjoyed your poem very much my friend!
    Merry Christmas!
Comment from JoannaN
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I love Christmas, even as an adult, I associate this time with comfort, reunions and a good time to reflect on my life. Thank you for your poem, time to begin with Christmas preparations :)

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
    Thank you Joanna! You are so very kind! And I agree w the wonderful feelings the season brings! Thanks again my sweet friend!
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
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Very nicely presented piece. The poem uses rhyming couplets and a regular meter very appropriately to emphasise the writer's faith in Christ's birth. The sincerity and joy in the poem are infectious!

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
    And Sarah, you are so incredibly kind! Thanks for your lovely review and comments my dear friend!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Your club response was EXCELLENT, Debi. You did a wonderful
job of expressing your thoughts and feelings about the season,
but most of all showing the love that lives in your heart because
of your faith. Your words flowed smoothly with great rhymes and
details that created great imagery. I know you wrote this from your
heart and everything mentioned was/is true. This time of year is
difficult for many, but He is always there to hear our prayers. Your
encouragement and sharing of your personal ups and downs added
much to your poem. The image was beautiful. I know God is in
your life,
Thanks for sharing an uplifting poem for Christmas
and all days, Jan

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
    Thank you my sweet friend for such a lovely review and kind comments. So appreciated Jan!
Comment from Lilly Flowers
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Now I'm humming, "Joy to the World.' In fact, I just got hold of my Christmas CD's and will start playing them in the morning when I work out. (I always listen to music when I exercise in the mornings.)

This was a lovely poem, with great rhythm and rhymes and meaning. Hugs, Lilly

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
    You are so lovely Lily, I do appreciate your very kind comments and I can also see you working out to Joy to the world. By three dognight? Haha! Remember that song? Thanks again sweet friend!.
Comment from amahra
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Thank you for sharing the joy of writing about our Lord and Savior, Jesus Christ. I really enjoyed reading this. In these last days, those of us who belong to Him must remind others, from time to time, about His great goodness and what He has done for our lives.

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
    Amahra, you are about as lovely as they come, thank you so much for the very kind comments and the gracious six stars. You and they are so appreciated, my dear friend!
Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Debi,
Thanks for this simple but meaningful poem about the true meaning of Christmas and the joy we should feel and share with those around us.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Merry Christmas
Joan

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
    And Joan, you are so incredibly kind! Thanks for your lovely review and comments my dear friend! Merry Christmas!!!!
reply by dragonpoet on 04-Dec-2022
    My pleasure, Debi.
    Joan
Comment from Bill Schott
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This poem, Season of Joy, Joy, Joy, reminds the readers that God has given the world grace, people have extended that good feeling to others, and this time of year it all comes together.

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
    -And Bill, you are so incredibly kind! Thanks for your great review and comments my dear friend!