Mourning Heart
Hopefully, in time, good memories will help heal.5 total reviews
Comment from Moonbeams Musings 55
Your poem touched my heart, it was so powerful and evoked so many memories. The photo blended so well with the feelings of loss, and grief. I can see why you won your contest.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2022
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Your poem touched my heart, it was so powerful and evoked so many memories. The photo blended so well with the feelings of loss, and grief. I can see why you won your contest.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much for sharing your feelings and for your feedback. You also have touched my heart.
Comment from Karyn2
So many intensely powerful words in this short poem. Wonderful word choices and deeply moving. "Mournful" takes this poem to the lonely, sadness that is engulfing the writer. The image is also the perfect accompaniment to the pain and sorrow expressed.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
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So many intensely powerful words in this short poem. Wonderful word choices and deeply moving. "Mournful" takes this poem to the lonely, sadness that is engulfing the writer. The image is also the perfect accompaniment to the pain and sorrow expressed.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and for the encouraging review.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Oy. It's pretty amazing how, in so few syllables, you could evoke such an intense stab right in the core of my heart. Fabulous job. I hope it's just a poem, Mystery Writer, and not a reality for you. xo
I hope you can boogie down to the winner's circle.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
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Oy. It's pretty amazing how, in so few syllables, you could evoke such an intense stab right in the core of my heart. Fabulous job. I hope it's just a poem, Mystery Writer, and not a reality for you. xo
I hope you can boogie down to the winner's circle.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
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Me too. Thanks for the read and the encouraging review.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a beautifully stated 5-7-5 contest entry. The text is a great size. The message of heartfelt lasting grief is clearly stated. I feel it daily for my daughter. The visual is powerful and a good representation for loss. You, mystery writer, get my last six for this week. Your message touched my grieving heart. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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This is a beautifully stated 5-7-5 contest entry. The text is a great size. The message of heartfelt lasting grief is clearly stated. I feel it daily for my daughter. The visual is powerful and a good representation for loss. You, mystery writer, get my last six for this week. Your message touched my grieving heart. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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Thanks so much for the six star review. So sorry to hear of your loss. Hope you can fill the hole in your heart with the good times you and your daughter shared.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Mourning Heart, has the proper formatting and reveals the sadness as the memories of what was and now isn't have to churn through both the heart and mind.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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This 5-7-5, Mourning Heart, has the proper formatting and reveals the sadness as the memories of what was and now isn't have to churn through both the heart and mind.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022
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Thanks for the read and review.
