Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

This was a great contest entry, Joanne. I loved the image, the
color scheme, and the font. Your syllable count was correct
per line, and you ended with a perfect last line.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022

Thank you Jan contest is over I didn?t many votes

Comment from Kaiku

Excellent

How do you not enjoy a verse that rings so true. Presentation is very nice and the prompt followed to the 'T'. Have a Merry Christmas and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022

Thank you so much

Comment from Karyn2

Excellent

A simple yet beautiful 5-7-5. The entire reason for Christmas wrapped up in the 5 last syllables. Lovely presentation too. Almost like the still of night before the dawning of a new day full of light and celebration.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022

Thank you

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A magical nativity scene created here with just a few words and I enjoyed the journey. No matter how many times we celebrate Christmas, it is always magical, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022

Thank you 🙂

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

This is a 5-7-5 Writing Prompt Contest Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
Announcing of the Christ Child.
This read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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This is a Blessed time indeed for we all need.
Need to realize the Christ was born on Christmas day.
Doctor Ricky 1024
And, good luck with your contest Entry.

 Comment Written 03-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2022

Thank you so much