Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I really liked how you contrasted the joy of the carols with the crisp air and how the message of the carols warmed the "chilled spirit." I don't know when the contest was but hope you do well in it.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2022

Thank you so much for your kind words. Harry T. won that contest with a beautiful poem about grief.

Comment from Rachelle Allen

Excellent

This is lovely! It's like a Hallmark Movie Channel offering in a FS 5-7-5. The words are beautiful and warming, the photo accompanying it is perfect, and you stayed within the correct syllabic perimeter.

Good luck to you; I hope you boogie down to the winner's circle!

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022

Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.

reply by Rachelle Allen on 05-Dec-2022

It was my pleasure.

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

I liked this piece. it flows nicely which isn't always easy to achieve with this format of poem.

Love the touch of alliteration and the piece itself is pleasing and timely.

All the best
GMG

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022

So glad you liked it. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I too love the sound of carols as the choir sings and the melodies linger in the air, a magical festive write, much enjoyed and I could hear those voices loud and clear here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2022

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022

Thanks, Dolly. Glad you enjoyed it.