Sorry - such a rush!
Breathless and heart-broken11 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
It would be a strange feeling if you had to make one last call. Who would you call; you have several children, so who would you choose? I would call God and talk to Him to extend my life.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2022
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It would be a strange feeling if you had to make one last call. Who would you call; you have several children, so who would you choose? I would call God and talk to Him to extend my life.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2022
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Yes, I probably would too.
Thanks so much for your thoughts, Rosemary. I appreciate them.
Comment from Mary Shifman
This is a cute story that made me laugh. It sounds like a mother who's in a rush to take care of business. Makes me think I should put all my plans on paper for when I have to make that final call! Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2022
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This is a cute story that made me laugh. It sounds like a mother who's in a rush to take care of business. Makes me think I should put all my plans on paper for when I have to make that final call! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2022
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Thank you Mary. I am glad you enjoyed it. It was fun to write.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Bill Schott
This one-hundred-word story, Sorry, has the proper word count and places all that follows in the brief text allowed in this writing game. That's commitment.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2022
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This one-hundred-word story, Sorry, has the proper word count and places all that follows in the brief text allowed in this writing game. That's commitment.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2022
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Thanks Bill. Much appreciated.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Short and sweet ... oh yeah, that was one rule, one hundred words, wasn't it. You've done well, my FanStory friend. Keep on truckin' forward. ..............................
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2022
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Short and sweet ... oh yeah, that was one rule, one hundred words, wasn't it. You've done well, my FanStory friend. Keep on truckin' forward. ..............................
Comment Written 07-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2022
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Thanks Tom. Much appreciated.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Well done. Good call.
Don't you just HATE being disqualified (and not getting your money back!)? One of my DQs was for not properly categorizing the piece. And it was a sure-fire winner!
Best wishes and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
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Well done. Good call.
Don't you just HATE being disqualified (and not getting your money back!)? One of my DQs was for not properly categorizing the piece. And it was a sure-fire winner!
Best wishes and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
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Yes, that's happened to me too, an accidental error. Another time my story was "not a story", despite a clearly identifiable beginning, middle and end! Anyway, I am glad you enjoyed this one. Thanks for reviewing and for your good wishes.
Comment from Sherry SG
An absolutely wonderful and a thoroughly entertaining read.
"Integrity or inheritance" haha. I loved the spin on words as well as the capitalization. You're so creative.
Good luck with the contest (not that you need much of that :) )
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
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An absolutely wonderful and a thoroughly entertaining read.
"Integrity or inheritance" haha. I loved the spin on words as well as the capitalization. You're so creative.
Good luck with the contest (not that you need much of that :) )
Comment Written 06-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2022
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Thank you Sherry for your amazing review, good wishes, and six stars! How wonderful. I'm glad you enjoyed my (slightly crazy) sense of humour.
Comment from Jay Squires
Oh, this is so clever! I wish I knew who wrote this. You packed so much humor, with just the right balance of pathos in it about the death, so that it has immediacy. I wish you all the luck in the world for the contest.
Jay
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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Oh, this is so clever! I wish I knew who wrote this. You packed so much humor, with just the right balance of pathos in it about the death, so that it has immediacy. I wish you all the luck in the world for the contest.
Jay
Comment Written 05-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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Lol. Thanks for a super review. I have a weird and dark sense of humour ( not always appreciated)! Thanks so much for the good luck wishes too.
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
I like the 'gallows' humour here. The idea that certain information can never be publicly revealed, even at the expense of committing a crime, is amusing in the circumstances!
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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I like the 'gallows' humour here. The idea that certain information can never be publicly revealed, even at the expense of committing a crime, is amusing in the circumstances!
Comment Written 05-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2022
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Lol. Glad you enjoyed my fun piece. Yes, I do have a weird and dark sense of humour. Thanks so much for reviewing.
Comment from prettybluebirds
You have done a wonderful job with the writing prompt. I love the humor in this writing. The picture couldn't be any more perfect. I wish you worlds of luck in the contest. Nice work.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
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You have done a wonderful job with the writing prompt. I love the humor in this writing. The picture couldn't be any more perfect. I wish you worlds of luck in the contest. Nice work.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
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Thank you so much! What an encouraging review for my little story.
Greatly appreciated.
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed this flash story.
It is well throughout and achieved.
I appreciate the larger font and overall presentation.
You have told a complete story using very few words.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
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I enjoyed this flash story.
It is well throughout and achieved.
I appreciate the larger font and overall presentation.
You have told a complete story using very few words.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2022
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Thank you very much. (Yes, there was in fact a limit of 100 words.) I am so glad you enjoyed my humorous piece.
